Deskro

~Deskreview~ I actually enjoyed this piece, it reminds me a lot of the novel I'm working on at the moment (I guess dystopia is f.o.t.m.). There are a few issues ...

~Deskreview~ Before I begin, I want to mention that Lizzy has already touched on a lot of things that I would have also mentioned, specifically the size of your paragraphs ...

-Deskreview- Hey diamondforce99, I was meant to be writing myself but alas, procrastination reared its ugly head once again, so here I am. This poem is great, it really paints ...

-Deskreview- Hey how you going? This poem caught my eye and since I was about to sleep, I thought I'd interest myself in some light reading... I was wrong. This ...

-Deskreview- Hey so, reading through this piece, it is very inconsistent in the fact that there are some really good aspects... and some really bad ones. First of all, the ...

-Deskreview- Hey chocolatecello, your poem is an interesting read, but it is clear that you didn't take the time to polish the poem like you could have. It has some ...

-Deskreview- This work hits close to home. I know the feeling when people don't believe in what you believe in, because they aren't you. They don't have the courage or ...

-Deskreview- So, this isn't normally a genre that interests me but your story actually managed to hold my attention (which is no small feat!). It was a cute story and ...

-Deskreview - I first off want to say what a cool idea it was to write a fictitious letter. An original concept (to me) and something that has a lot ...

I just want to start by saying how refreshing it is to read a poem that rhymes. Too often people go overboard trying to use abstract imagery and forget that ...