Demora

I apologize for the tiles gotta remember how to get spaces in between those stanzas cause it keeps messing up on me otherwise I would originally not have those there, ...

Glad to review wonderful poetry!!! ^^

sure thing

I fixed the poem feel free to re-review it

Wanna take a look at it again I tried fixing the formatting

please forgive the one line out there and the way it is spaced it was suppose to be couplets but I can't get it too work

Dearly sorry 'bout the way it's formatted the thing wouldn't work for me so now it looks bad and not how I want I to look.

I must say very good with the details. I could really get a feel for the main characters despair as well, like I was them and wanting so badly to ...

I must say very good with the details. I could really get a feel for the main characters despair as well, like I was them and wanting so badly to ...

Love, love, loved it, especially the last two lines(like everyone else) you obviously have something there. I have yet to look at other poems of yours, yet this one I ...

Loved it man, course why wouldn`t I your writing is so good. Only cause you do it on a computer or IPod touch.

Love it man, it really speaks out.

Thank you very much these comments help me a lot when I write my poems.

Oh I will

Thanks I was aiming for something like that, very helpful to me.