Demoness

Thanxx for the review! I did agree with you on putting the "on" on the second line 'cause I did that at first but then I didn't like how that ...

Haha, I'm glad you liked it since yes, it's not that new and I can't really say it's my best work :PP

Confusiee!! As always, your poetry///song-writing is beautiful! I espacially adore the second verse. It speaks to my mind, and my mind understands! I didn't come to give you this epic ...

Aooow, thank you dear young but mature walker! Lovelie review!

Thankss for the review :) Agreed, the language is a little dry- but it will have to rest for a while before I'll get a new go at it.

You're a mastermind Persy, and this, this is a masterpiece. // Sagaa

Ohh Confuser, you are a little feel-good-mastermind... and that's about all I have to say. You're like awesome, so, that's that.

Deep, beautiful, awesome!

"nothing WRONG* with the structure"... that is

Storeyy.. You made me cry... That's not fair at all... I'm crying... And it's all your fault! :( Oh well, not like this piece needs to be glorified anymore than ...

Duude, how do you do it? I would die to write like you, there's just so much honesty in your work. It's not words crafted to wake feelings, it's true ...

I understand how you see it, only I think you misread the meaning of that line. Maybe that's because it's a bit vague but anyways, one line doesn't add up ...

Ooh, well. Thank you very much. Aand to that review needing be done, I'd love to review your work - As long as it's poetry :)

What I mean, is simply- That everything is relative, and everything is about comparing. Here we have Hatred on the one end and Love on the other. But there is ...

Lumi! This is brilliant! Love the dark mood and the way it flows and ooh... lovely! I don't really have anything helpful to add just wanted to tell you this ...