Demoness

Hm... I think, like the previous reviewer that this piece has got alot of potenital but that it misses that... touch that makes you swoon. I don't know what's missing ...

Hey! This piece had a real great content, and you said alot of true things in a good way. However, I must agree with what Jenna said. This sounds more ...

Amazing poem! Great story told, I love how in these few lines you managed to involve so many factors.. god, good, evil, life and death! Just Brilliant! All though, if ...

I like you unic style of writing and the content of this poem was very powerful! I didn't wear my error-glasses today so all I could see was a whole ...

Puff... that was one long poem. I liked it alot though, great imagery and an interesting view of the afterlife. I don't have much complains.. maybe if you shortened it ...

Aoow, this was a really sweet poem, very emotional and all! I liked it alot. Great rythm and flow... maybe think about puntuation? Otherwise. "High Five* This is my favorite ...

Haha, what a fun idea! I love the imagery and descriptions! - Things that could be improved though... * Structur, please chop the big stanza in to a few smaller ...

Very Well Done! I liked the imagery of this piece and would really like to see the picture that trigged your imagination to write this! Nitpicks! - Punctuation! It help ...

Hellou you! Here comes I, to review your piece! In the darkness of the night, Where no moon can pierce with light, In the shadows where it lies, A murd'rous ...

Fantastic! Brilliant! Amazing! I love these kinds of poems with a mysterious evil with an inner good. One thing that kinda bugged the flow for me was the captivated letters ...

Oh well... Inkwell kinda managed to say all that needed to be said about punctuation and grammar errors so all I've got left to say what that I LOVED the ...

Yes, indeed it was an interesting poem. I love the flow and rythm of it and your imagery was great, could be slightly improved I guess but... well, good! The ...

I'm the Demon with an ess and here's a quick little review! :D Haha, this poem took an interesting twist. I LIKE IT! Think you should look over the puntuation ...

Helloouuu, This is Demoness speaking and she's come to give her opinion on this piece! Soo.. Well... I thought this was a great poem. BUT the flow was a bit ...

Helluuee, Demoness here and I'll be giving you my opinion on this piece. And I'll begin with saying.... WOW! This poem is so powerful! You've used such great imagery and ...