Demoness

Okay so.. I like this topic, I've written a similar poem, but the argument was between my body and mind and I was sortof just stuck in the middle. You ...

Okay soo. I love your structure and rythm, this piece flows just amazingly. I did find the content a bit dull and cliché though, there wasn't much imagery and it ...

Hellou my Non-Rival! Demoness speaking here! I must say... ehm. WOW, even without the punctuation this was quite amazing. I was hooked after the third line and then I kinds ...

Seriously! You've got three versions of this poem! Haha, it would've been fun if I thought the last one dissappeared and I spent another 5 on making another new one ...

Gosh I wanna kill myself.. I just wrote the longest review ever and then my lap died so I couldn't finnish it. Heaven did I get Happy! I'�ll try to ...

Maay goooooood! This was endless! I got through it though, and it wasn't that painful :D I'll begin with the lesser good stuff; (I won't go in detail with the ...

Aoow, this is so great. Amazing dedaction to Japan, it was really touching! I love that you really manage to get the message and feelings through with your words, it ...

Hm.. I'm sorry, but I find this piece quite cliché. There are loads of poems just like these, and if this is the topic you want to focus on you ...

Hellie Hallou! My name.. or username or whatever, is Demoness and I'm here to inflict my comments on this piece. I'll begin with saying.. INTERESTING topic! It really is a ...

Heey again, seems like your poems are all over the place! This one was quite original, I like it! Nice stanzas!, and I like the "Three one-syllable words" that you ...

Hm.. this was quite enjoyable. Simple, had a lack of imagery though.. it was just, straight forward! But that's not always a bad thing ^^ The flow was great though ...

Hellie Halloue again! This poem was quite amazing, great imagery and the content was so sweet and beautiful! I loved the structure, but you could work on your punctuation. Also.. ...

Heyaa! I'm Demoness, here's a little inflict on this piece I must begin to say... ; Aoow, what a sweet poem! Simple but still Suuuuper! Love the flow, the imagery! ...

Oh my goddess, and hey, I'm Demoness! This is such a touching poem! Amazing story you're telling here, you deliver a very important message and I love how even though ...

Heelluue, Here comes a quickky, but hopefully helpful, review!! Ehm so I always begin with the lesser good.. No I dont, but now I am! Eh, so- * You've managed ...