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Hahaha, I guess it's because I was feeling very rhyme-y today. Tear it apart if you want. ;D
Hello! IcyFlame here with a review!
I'm loving the questions you pose throughout the poem, they're very thought provoking which I assume was the main purpose you had in mind? It's a good concept and you've paid attention to detail in the piece. You've used a good form and as a result it seems to flow well. I think your punctuation and grammer was just right , and I can't think of anything to change!
I feel this was a pretty useless review so I'm sorry!
Keep on typing!
Hellie Hallou! My name.. or username or whatever, is Demoness and I'm here to inflict my comments on this piece.
If there was one thing that could be improved it's the punctuation, you begin wonderfully but the further down I read the worse ít got ^^
I'll begin with saying.. INTERESTING topic! It really is a good question. Other than that it was also a good poem.
I like the structur and the piece flows very well. I like how you manage to keep good structure and keep up the rhyming without making it sound the least forced or even tense
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
Hellie Hallou! My name.. or username or whatever, is Demoness and I'm here to inflict my comments on this piece.
If there was one thing that could be improved it's the punctuation, you begin wonderfully but the further down I read the worse ít got ^^
I'll begin with saying.. INTERESTING topic! It really is a good question. Other than that it was also a good poem.
I like the structur and the piece flows very well. I like how you manage to keep good structure and keep up the rhyming without making it sound the least forced or even tense
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
Where does the wind blows? Everywhere! But that's a good poem you've written there =)
That was a really good poem. I liked how you thought of so many differnt things that have to do with the wind and how you compared it to differnt things. It was also good how you stared the beginging with wondering and ended it with wondering. The biging was a work of art I could tell that it was well thought out. The end was almost just as good which is hard to acheive so I congradulate you on a job well done! Hope all you other work is as good as this!