Demeter

Oooh... I actually liked this! My first thought was "Oh no, butterflies, this can't be good" but it was! It's simple, not many words in it, but still it's satisfying. ...

Okay... first of all, the subject isn't very up-to-date, is it? There were also a couple of typos. And I think you should leave space between a comma and a ...

Hmm... It's somehow hard to give any reviews for this, but I'll try my best. You could delete that "right?" completely, it just is there, sitting in the corner and ...

I liked this, although there were a few things disturbing me. "Jailer" doesn't sound like a real world, of course this may be the whole point, but still, I think ...

I really, really liked this. I don't mind at all that it's negative, because that's way I prefer to write, too. My favourite lines: It’s sun during the funerals, And ...

I was sure I had reviewed this before! But I haven't :O Weird? Alright, let's get to the point already. I think this is quite a simple poem, nothing really ...

Ooo... scary... ;) I love the name Morgana. Unfortunately, though, I spotted quite many typos here and there. For example, metalic (should be metallic), annouced (announced), babish (babyish) etc. And

Wow, I actually liked this much. I was just reading it thinking, "this is very nice", and I hadn't even noticed that it rhymed, too! So that was even better, ...

I think the first three lines crash a little abrubtly. "What do you see when you close your eyes? (I like this one, somehow) A million tiny dots? What you ...

I don't know why, but there was something very, very irresistible in this poem. It was different from phony, fake artistic poems and I loved it. Short, sweet and strange. ...

I like the first look and impression of it. The two "stills" in a row disturbed me a little ("Still the dew falls. Still, the lonely lily..."), though. "The undertow ...

I really like this and got emotional :) You don't tell too much, just enough. Oh my, this is so sad, I feel bad for her. Poor girl... Very good ...

Well, Suzanne said it all, so there's not much for me to say anymore. It was a cute and simple kind of poem. But actually I have to say it ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! I agree with everyone here, your poem kind of takes us nowhere; it starts and ends in the same place, if you know what I ...

For me, this was kind of confusing. But maybe it's just me - I haven't read very much poetry. I liked the triple rhyme game-fame-shame, why have you used it ...