Demeter

So there are two poems, I suppose? Let's see... Anything lacking mockery. This line was full of long words that felt strange after the very short previous line. But maybe ...

Hello! You make me sad. You make me mad. You make me cry. You make me want to die. The last line breaks the flow; as you can see, it's ...

Hello! So here's the crit I promised :) I'm not a fantasy fiction expert, but I'll try my best. The screams of agony pierced the eardrums, countered by the gently ...

That's very true what Ringo and Eimear said, but that's also true what the poem said! Well, I don't really think this as a poem, either, it's more like an ...

I know nothing about limericks so I don't dare reviewing this really. :) I have heard the name, but I don't know what's it supposed to be like. There was, ...

Hello, vicko. Let's see what I can make out of this. The structure is a little random – the stanzas are not equal. Of course, they don't always have to ...

Hi again! Wow – Jabber has pretty much said everything there is to say. From the moment I saw the title I knew what this was about – writing! The ...

Hi, here by request! :) (Sday's right about that Holden thing. Oh, now I feel like reading Catcher again.) Okay. At first I thought "Oh, gee, where is this going ...

Oh, is this supposed to be a sequel? Should I read the first one first? Well, I've already read this, so now I'm just going to review it all the ...

Okay, E. These are the first lyrics by you that I've read. And they're great. I only hope I could hear the melody, but the one I imagined to it ...

Hi. This was pretty good, but in the end I felt like there was too much of the chorus, coming after every verse. Maybe it could come only after every ...

This was actually really good. I can relate to the narrator; I've done exactly the same thing than she is and suffered from it in exactly the same way. The ...

Hi, E! I just got a feeling I'd like to read your poems right now, and here I am. The moment from hell has happened, The bite was worse than ...

This is really aggressive. I can't really even review this, timjim said it all. I'm just asking, What's the point? What's the point of hitting readers with harsh and disrespectful ...

Hmmm. First of all, it was really... short. Possibly this can't be the whole chapter? Or are you even posting this in chapters? So now I'm going to copy the ...