Demeter

Hi, Not Me! I don't think I've even reviewed very much by you? Well, it's about time! It was a pretty restaurant. We had picked Considering the fact your story ...

Hi symphony! Of course I'll review this! Your mother, your father, Your sister, your brother, your aunts, your uncles, and all the others. Good opening, makes me want to read ...

Hi there, Sock! Here as requested! Hopefully it doesn't matter that I haven't read the previous one? When I woke up, everything was still back back – or black? ; ...

Hi, Ducati! 'Course I'll review this. :) It is strange that the things we remember from our childhood are so often the things that determine the adults we have become. ...

Hi, Ashley! Of course I'll review this for you! :) PREFACE My body flirted with the shadows. Nice and unique image, although I didn't understand the meaning before reading the ...

Hi there, Emmy! I'm your best friend but now she is too. Here's where the big problem comes in Too many words, it breaks the flow. Also, this is plainly ...

Hi, Conrad! Xxx11blackmascaratears11xxX: Teerz uvb1ack angst n 5ad1! the_naruto_twilight_harrypotter_fanthing: Reviews!!! I need reviews!!! Give me reviews!!! Reviews, please!!! Review my stories!!! S

Hi, sofi! Of course I'll review this for you. Sorry it's taken so long, though. I enjoyed the first part. Like Conrad said, it has some sort of poetic touch ...

Hi, niccy! I’d completely forgotten about the smell until it hit me in third period Webpage Design. As usual comma I sat in the back row furthest from Miss Hale; ...

'Kay, hi, here I am. Sorry it took a while. ELLEN Kassie was waiting for me outside the school gates when I hopped off the bus. Instantly, I could see ...

Hi, IT! Sorry it's taken a while. I ran. I ran so hard, my breath appearing before me in the cold evening air. My big blue eyes glistened with tears ...

Hiya there. wrench from me my soul. Ouch. My eyes burn. =) Do you mean "wrench my soul from me"? I must stop this chatter. After all this "I be" ...

Hi, Rascalover. I'm sorry this has taken so long, but well, I'm here now as you requested. :) I won't probably have the time for the whole story right now, ...

Hi, anti-pop – sorry this has taken so long. But here I am now :) Let's start with nit-picks. she was even wearing his favorite dress. This sounds a little ...

Hi Adna, finally here. :) Torn If mirrored in the other’s face (I think this is a bit too wordy to be the opening line.) she found the image of ...