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Hey there, Romania! There is almost nothing wrong with this poem, except for the second-to-last line, "But it death smelled of roses and not of rot," where the word "it" ...

Hey there, wtppowers! First of all, wow. This poem is AMAZING. I have nothing bad to say about this, so here are some of my favorite lines (even though I ...

Hey there, CollinWitte! I really like your idea with an acrostic poem because I haven't been able to find any of those on here, although I may just not be ...

Hey there, jls1638! This a pretty good poem, and I feel as if I can relate to it a lot, especially on some of those really bad days. I like ...

Hey there, Kanome (and your little sister)! For a six-year-old, this is actually pretty good. I laughed some and overall this is great. There are some spelling mistakes, but that's ...

Hey there, MasterGrieves! There isn't really much to say about this poem. It was pretty good, although it seemed sort of like a rant, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. ...

Hey there, Hadj! I'm going to go right to what each stanza means. Stanza 1: In this stanza you compare us to forgotten stones that had been tossed into the ...

Hey there, Pinkiegirl13! I have a couple things that I would fix/add. First of all, for Vane's appearance, I think that you could add a little more detail to what ...

Hey there, Pinkiegirl13 (by the way, I like that name)! I'm pretty sure that anyone could see that Nani is one of the "bad kids", especially considering the fact that ...

Hey there, moneypowerglory! First of all, this is really short, but in a good way. I honestly don't know how you would make this into something really long, like a ...

Hey there, EmeraldEyes! There is only one way to describe this poem, Amazing with a capital a. I feel as if I can really relate to this poem, especially if ...

Hello there, ConfusedGlasses! First of all, I really like your name. It's pretty cool. Second of all, I absolutely love this poem, especially since I like free-verse poems a bit ...

Hey there! This is a really great poem! This poem is really well written. These are my favorite stanzas in here, "There is a man who speaks in metaphors, And ...

Hello there, Sarahjo! This poem is really good. Also, I don't think this poem is too simple. If anything, I think it has a lot of detail, although that may ...

This is really good. I love how you start each stanza (I think that's the right word) with "we are never at peace". Although I would suggest that you start ...