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Wow, this is a a really unique idea, that I enjoyed reading, however there were a few things that bothered me so here I go. I loved your word choice ...

As someone who struggles with mild OCD and social anxiety, I found this poem to be very relatable and powerful. I found the second verse to be my favorite, I ...

Whoa, this almost made me cry! This has to be the best poem I've read on here so far! I loved your two opening lines, "Oh, how sweet is the ...

Wow! This is awesome writing.! The good: Tantia's voice is very strong and wonderfully written, giving an in-depth look at her personality. I'm guessing this isn't a just another fanfic ...

Oh my goodness, this is so good, my some of my favorite lines being "look at the constellations, the pictures made from stars." ----------- Anyway, first verse, "you've spent your ...

This is gorgeous! I liked the rhythm and my favorite lines were, "Life changed Life gone In a minute" However, maybe take the title away since the title is already ...

Wow, this poem is so pretty! Structurally, I loved it, my favorite lines being, "something from long ago something that fluttered in the wind from my grasp lay buried in ...

This is a very interesting idea and a promising start to a uniquely fun fanfic, so first I would first go into what is great! Capria Tonks: It's awesome that ...