DeepCrystal

Coming from someone who has a penchant for writing about damaged characters, this was pretty decent. Obviously the narrator finds this woman attractive, but he is also repulsed by the ...

That was a scary poem. Not that it was necessarily a horror flick, but still the intensity of it was extreme. This poem basically covers what is happening in the ...

That was very very long. However, for something as lengthy as this, you did an excellent job of keeping it entertaining. I like how you have given a portrayal of ...

That was something else. You are obviously trying to get this guy to get a grip and go after the woman he loves, but you have done it in such ...

I daresay someone is missing the summer that has come come and gone. No worries, at least it is not as if it is biannual; it will come again. I ...

This is my first review in weeks--or months I know not, but let's see what I can do to illuminate your mind and tweak this piece of poetry. I don't ...

That was a very interesting poem. Dark, but very good. I don't know if this was your intent, but the dragonfly seems to me like a symbol for something. Perhaps ...

Well, that was very, very intense. Might I suggest changing the rating to "sixteen plus"? Just because the content might be a little too intense for your intended target audience. ...

Jeez, so much pessimism in this piece. I hope that this doesn't reflect upon what you truly think of yourself. It if is, I'm gonna have to find you and ...

If this were a video message, I would be laughing!! This is only too true. It's maddening how hard it is to get the first word out, but once you ...

This was an interesting piece. So apparently Max is battling lesbianism? That's a tricky situation, especially since the one she is expressing sexual desire towards just happens to be her ...

Huh, I feel like I was being given a history lesson here. RIP Steve Jobs. I feel that this is bound to be an interesting piece. However, I'd like to ...

Happy review day, DeepCrystal here to give a review!!! I saw a LOT of dialogue in this chapter. Not that there was anything wrong with that, but personally, I like ...

A story about swooning I take it? First Miss Narrator declares her thoughts about the stupidity of "love at first sight" and then she finds herself swooning over a newcomer. ...

This was a quite a clever poem. I liked how each stanza began with every other line of the previous stanza. It added an alternative type of rhythm that I ...