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Re: The Perfect Thief Prologue
Hey there Guarav! Deanie here as requested. So, first I will start with an apology. You have a lot of awesome reviews here already and I don't really have the ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: A Forbidden Fruit
Hola! So, as I mentioned earlier I figure out why I thought this poem had a deeper meaning. (And maybe you can add it in there as well.) I thought ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Lucid Dreaming; I diagnosed myself - Chapter One
Hello Secrete! This was so not rubbish. It was quite good in fact, I enjoyed reading it. I thought it was clever how you mixed his appearance description in with ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Never Ending Darkness- Chapter Four
Hey Shady! Ooh another chapter. This one was nice because we got to see Auron again and you briefly mentioned the reason why Kyanna had to be working in the ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Imagine
You know who it is ^.^ The girl with the dastardly name :D Okay, so I didn't think this was bad, and but I am also going to say this ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Five: Glowing Stars in a Blind Girl's Room
Hey there Highness! You must be feeling very special today because you've got my 900th review under your chapter! I have to say though, this might not be a very ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart Chapter Two: Go-Time
Deanie at your service again, your royal highness *bows* I have to say, I loved it. I love the idea of all these siblings pranking each other with mayonnaise and ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - Castor's Confrontation with Miles
Messenger, You are posting so fast D: That's a good thing though! Anyways, the confrontation chapter. It was pretty good and it was kind of annoying to see the way ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter One: The Way This Works
Hello, your royal highness. Deanie here to review your novel ^.^ I just have to say, I absolutely love the idea of a troubled bunch of a family. Triplets and ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 1 - Running To Check On Kalan
Heyo Messenger. It's me. Miles could run for miles? Geddit? :P Anyways, on to the chapter! I have to say, this was interesting. We're getting to see a lot more ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 3-2)
Hey there Ulala! I have to say, this was a cleverly placed chapter. I mean, we've only just learnt the different between Yang and Yin kind of, and we can ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 3-1)
Me again :3 This review is going to be pretty short, seeing as it is a pretty short chapter and an almost perfect one! I really liked this past chapter, ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 2-2)
Hey there Ulala! I decided it was time for me to go through and review this story. I also read the previous chapters so that I would know what was ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 3 Part 2 - Plans Sabotaged
Messenger, I come baring a review! Kinnard DD: I know who he is and what role he will play *spoilers* and I am so surprised! I am glad that he ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Adventures of The G.L.R Chapter 3: Em
Hi there Niraco! Even less for me to comment on in this chapter. It was the best so far in my opinion! I really liked how you put the action ...
May 10, 2014
