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Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Cry Wolf: Chapter 4

    Hi there Anabel! You posted these fairly quickly after one another! Hehe I am glad to have more to read :D This was also pretty long, but I guess so ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11

    Hi Noelle! Whoa, this was a very well written chapter. I am glad you also showed this from Falyn's perspective. I wondered if she was going to be able to ...

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Realistic Re: Lucid Dreaming; I diagnosed myself - Chapter Two

    Hey Secrete! Back for more of course. I don't mind these chapters coming out too slowly ;) I think you did a good job here of making me curious! I ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Story of A Life

    Hai Timmy, Well, this was a nice poem. I took it to be showing us how each book is a different story. A story that follows someone's life and how ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Elven Sword Fight (Hunger Games Re-Draft)

    Hey Shady! Ooh this was well done! I even read a bit of the original just to see how much it has changed, and I have to say it was ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Breathe The Poison

    Hai Timmy! Yeah it's me again. The person you cannot get rid of. I hope the part where Finnick dies was not the only part of MockingJay that bothered you. ...

    Jun 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi; 2.2

    Hi there Cesare! Back for some more of Vampirial! This was an interesting chapter. Even though they have Dreyfus they are still going after Vampirial, and it seems that with ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Renewed in White

    Hai Timmy! This was a pretty different poem to what you usually write :D Instead of it being narrative it was more so describing a scene, a bit of the ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 11

    Hey Fortis! Yay! I knew I was going to get here faster this time :D This was a pretty great chapter and all on its own, and you've left me ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Cry Wolf: Chapter 3

    Hiya Anabel! As always, back for more. I wonder how they are going to solve this mystery in the end, even though they vaguely know who is the source of ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Note of Ink and Tears

    Heyyy Timmy! I did mention I was in the mood to review after all. Why not another poem? This was one of your lesser poems if I am to be ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: Godtrust ~ Chp.4

    Hi HighTop! Eeee, I am sorry I am late. But better late than never (is my excuse all the time xD) So! I always love reading your chapters because they ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Strong and Weak

    Hi Timmy! Ooh a haiku. These are the hardest to review, so maybe this might end up being a comment. I have to say I like the idea here, talking ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 10

    Hi Fortis! So sorry for the lateness but I am here now ;) Another great chapter I must add. I don't think the description of the circles was too bad ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Trail of Bloody Footprints

    Hi Timmy! There really isn't too much to say when it comes to this poem. I've already told you this is definitely one of your best ones ^.^ It has ...

    Jun 7, 2014


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