Deanie

Hey there sis! Oh wow, the top spy is deserting the mission? I wonder what could happen next. Everything is falling to pieces and without her, there is no one ...

Hey there Megsug! It's always good to see another chapter of yours posted. Also, I can see you've included the challenge in there too, which you did pretty smoothly. Didn't ...

Hey there Cesare! I can see that Birkhoff has given you an awesome review and covered most of the things I would've picked out myself. So I would like to ...

Heya Silverlock! Thanks for letting me know this was posted! As always, it's a great pleasure to read. Especially this chapter as well. I believe it's the best you've written ...

Hey there Ulala! Again, a new chapter I didn't realize was out until now! So, I've finally arrived. :3 This was another intriguing chapter. We're steadily learning more about how ...

Hey there Alchemist! Yay! I'm finally all up to date *does a little dance* I guess I should just get on with the review now, right? Wow. This is a ...

Me again Fortis! Ah, all through reading this I didn't make a single note for things I could possibly comment on. I think this is just showing how wonderful your ...

Hey Fortis! Looks like I have a little bit of catching up to do >.> Getting to it now! Right, as always, you have a brilliant way with your writing. ...

Hey there Alchemist! This seemed like a connecting chapter to me, where we are going to travel between the two phases of your story. So, from the murdering of the ...

Hey there sis! It's me again to continue reading :3 What a good continuation of the chapter. We can see how they recruit new Utopians. I guess this would be ...

Hey there Alchemist! It's me again :3 Whoa. I think this has to be my favourite chapter so far! It was dark and daring, what with the Lord causing trouble. ...

Heya sis! I don't have much but nitpicks to say about this chapter at all! You've done a good job of covering everything that needs to be - plot, characters, ...

Hey there Alchemist! What an interesting continuation! What I liked so much was the fact that Sethis had such a deep conversation with Aleron and made him realize that he ...

Hey there Willow! Here to catch up and read the last bit of this story! I have to say though, there isn't too much for me to comment on at ...

Hey there! Good morning ^.^ This was a good chapter! I liked how we got introduced to Flame, it's an interesting addition to the story :) I wonder it's going ...