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Aria! You have to keep writing this! You can't leave me at this cliffhanger here. So much has begun happening, and I know you have so much to tell. And ...

Hi Ulala! It's me again, here to be fully caught up. It was about time Kai's feelings were allowed to explode as well. I feel like she's been trying to ...

Hi Esca! Whoa! What a chapter that was! I loved reading this, and seeing a character, albeit fictional, do such a lovely thing for a woman in a hard case ...

Hi Ulala! I finally had some time to review this piece for you. I have to say this was a pretty good chapter overall and we get to see a ...

Oh hai Pompadour! Look who's a little bit late to show up to the party ;) After seeing those amazing two reviews below this I wondered what there could possibly ...

Hi Noelle! I am not quite sure what to make of this chapter. I didn't really like it, but then at the same time it's kind of that annoying feeling ...

Hi 90skid! Well, this was another nice chapter to see. We get a bit more of her with the horses, which is always something nice, especially so that she can ...

Hi Aria! You've managed to write another short but wonderful chapter here. I am really liking seeing all sorts of things from Iluan's point of view. I am afraid this ...

Hi Yastika! Ooh yay, now I can be all caught up with your chapters! I do like a good internal conflict, and this is definitely the right way to use ...

Hi Therese! Happy review day! Ooh I am back sooner than I expected I would be able to get to this. But I am glad I am able to ^.^ ...

Hi sis! I do want to review this, although I haven't reviewed any poetry in ages and my poetry reviewing skills are pretty rusty. I will do my best. But ...

Hi Fortis! Happy review day! It's always so good to see another chapter of this posted. And for once I am also the first person to review! Yay! I liked ...

Hi Meg! Happy review day! Ooh, another very good chapter! Is it just me or is your writing improving with every chapter you post? Again, we get to see how ...

Hi Esca! Happy review day! I have to say I liked this chapter a lot! You did mention that we should hold out when it comes to her relationship with ...

Hi Noelle! Happy review day! Okay, so this chapter wasn't one of your best, but it wasn't one of the worst either. It was well written and I have absolutely ...