Deanie

Wow. This poem was great. I was really interested in the title. It was so sudden and tragic when the bleachers collapsed. Really sad. And I loved how you ended ...

I'm speechless. That was such a deep moving poem. I read it and I knew exactly how you felt. Well, your best friend moved, but for me it was the ...

Great poem. I liked how the beginning verse was repeated at the end, it gave it a real nice feel. The flow was great and the only spelling mistake I ...

Very nice description. I have never read The Black Sun, but still I love this writing. I only could noticed two little mistakes: The Black Sun, the call her. I ...

I really loved this poem. At the beginning I was a bit confused with all the metaphors but towards the ending it was a really pretty message. Happiness in sadness. ...

This was a really sweet nice poem. I can tell you put effort into it and the message is really nice. It connects with the english lesson I had today ...

Hmm. Okay this poem was good. I liked how the past was calling to hear and she needed to get back there. Why? I guess we will never know but ...

Really good writing. I read the second half before the first half, but now I can understand the story a LOT more. I think your description is perfect and you ...

I really like this poem. A very nice message, and true to many people. I like how you repeat the freak thing. It made your point really clear. And then ...

I liked this poem. It was very serious, with a deep meaning. I didn't like the use of the word till but I guess thats okay. If you used until ...

I really liked this. I understood it and everything. Although you did give the reader enough information to get across the main idea, understand the relationship between the guys and ...

Interesting. I wonder why everyone was fighting over him. This prologue made me wonder what was special about Clay that a mini war can happen over him. I wonder what ...

I really liked this poem. It was nice and romantic and sweet. I liked the title a lot, it made me really want to read the poem. Using old english ...

I really like this poem because it was short, simple and very inspiring. I like the beginning, and the last line was very touching. I liked how you listed all ...

Hi Blue! I would like to say I think you did put enough description in, I really liked this chapter. It was nice to learn a little bit more about ...