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Hi Abbie I read your poem and I think it is okay. There are a couple of things that need to be smoothed out here. But it has a good ...

QARA QUEEN + sister! I loved this poem so much! It's sad and sweet and true. Many people slowly ruin themselves and all some people can do is watch. I ...

Hi Youngwolf, I really liked this poem. The rhyme was really naturally and flowed very well. I only have one little problem with this poem, and it appears in this ...

Hi Baron, I really liked this poem. It had really beautiful language and very strong imagery. I could actually see the person at the window looking through. I liked the ...

Hello. I really liked your poem. The title was really nice and it made me want to read it. So good job there. I got the feeling it was a ...

Hi Lashea. I think this poem is okay. It's not really amazing, but it's not terrible either. I think it just needs to have more added to it and more ...

Hi Whitney, This poem was really nice. I liked the idea of writing for your best friend. I was really interested as soon as I read the first couple of ...

Hi Katie I really like this poem. It showed how you felt very clearly through your words. I liked the repetition, which gave it a nice touch. The poem was ...

Hi. I thought this work was more like a short story than a poem. It didn't seem to have any poetic language or layout, so maybe it should be in ...

Hi Stargazer! I liked the idea of your friend being writing! I was glad you didn't give it away straight away, that made it more entertaining! The timing is a ...

Creativ! I absolutely loved this! It was really confusing at first, but when I got the hang of it it was so much fun to read. It put a smile ...

Hi. Hmm... I liked the idea of your poem, about new years resolutions. I did like the story of how you didn't stick to them. But your poem was a ...

Hi WritersDream! Well, this poem did put a smile on my face. I was really great to see rain put in this way. And I loved how you concluded with ...

Hi there I think this poem needs a lot more work done to it. It seemed like you were trying to think of a word that started with the correct ...

Hi Stargazer! I really liked this poem. I think of it more as a poem than a song. I think you had a very good layout and I liked how ...