Deanie

Hey BlueAfrica, I liked this poem. It had a true and just meaning behind it, and I can tell this is a subject you feel strongly about. I found myself ...

Hey there, Well this was a nice piece of writing. I loved your characters, Tommy and Rosa. Rosa has a great personality and is a nice person. However her reason ...

Hi there Lovely, As sonnets go, this was fairly okay. It had a good rhythm and flow, and was perfect layout for a sonnet. What was more disappointing was the ...

Hey there! This was a good story, well written and all. I liked it :) But there wasn't really anything new in there. There were a few spelling problems. Like ...

Hello Inout, I can tell you this was alright. It was an easy read, and interesting enough. You had good suspense building up there. Jan - the character was confused ...

Hi I'm with Jordin, I'm sorry but this needs to be cleared out of the green room. This seemed to have a good title but it still needs to be ...

Back again as well :) I liked this chapter. It showed the relationship between the members of this group. It did seem a bit strange that Jason recognised Dane's dad. ...

Hi BalckNether, It was a bit confusing, but I think I get the gist of it. I really like how you've built up the character of Dane, and now we're ...

Hi Scribblebug, I'm back again :) Again a nice chapter and introduction of new characters. I liked it. The layout was better this time, with new paragraphs for each speaker. ...

Hi Scribblebug, I like this story, and I think I could like it even more, if it was more storylike. I think the actions pretty hard to follow. This happening, ...

Hi Scribblebug, So this was a good prologue. I'm interesting in what the virus is, and what caused it. But it was a little hard to read because of the ...

Hi Speakerskat, It's a nice poem :) It's sweet but sad, and something I'm sure many people can relate too. You tell the story well. But I feel like this ...

Hi BrokenSkye, I'm not too sure what i think of this poem. I understand it - but at the same time I don't. The speaker can't live up to the ...

There was a lot crammed in here. I was too overwhelmed with information. I did understand the gist of it though. There were some bits I especially liked. Like when ...

Hi there, Swag Well, I have read all of Scatty Cat. This was humorous though, and entertaining. But apart from that, I found it reasonably pointless. Is this a way ...