Deanie

Back again ^^ I didn't see any technical things wrong in this chapter, which is great! But there's something about the story of the whole that is beginning to bother ...

Hey there Change! Getting round to those reviews I promised you. So I decided to start at chapter one because, well, that only makes logical sense :D I liked this. ...

Hey Sarah! So is the end of the book? Is this basically the ending and a connecting bit to a sequel? I feel like it should be! Well, it was ...

Hi Sarah Even though this scene is supposed to be full of action (which it is) You don't make it full of drama or too fast paced. But somehow you ...

Hey Sarah! I like this more and more. The drama is picking up, what with the bandits being separated from Herman and Danielle. The truth being out about Judas and ...

Hey Sarah! I'm telling you, these chapters just get better the more I read! I love how the relationship between Samuel and Danielle has developed and how it's even turned ...

Hey Sarah, Deanie here again! I liked this chapter, a lot more than the previous ones. I will say it has greatly improved on the detail front! Especially during the ...

Hey Sarah, Well, this was a really long chapter. Maybe next time you should post one and two separately? It's a bit lengthy to ask for a whole review on ...

Hey there Smanske, I've read this and I think it's quite good. You've got a great style of writing there, and you've laid out the beginning of this story nicely. ...

Hey Rishabh, So this is how the whole story of Operation Imperial begins and ends. I am glad I was able to read you're story all the way through and ...

Hey Rishabh, Time for me to read the end of the story. I was bit a shocked when I found out Ratan had lowered himself to suicide. He seemed like ...

Hey there :) I'm just here to give a brief review of this introduction, because you've gotten some great feedback here already. Basically I'm just passing through so I can ...

Hey Nina, Well, you've got a nice story here. You've already got some great reviews here as well so I'll just try to add what I can. I won't go ...

Hey Kman, So, I'm finally here. It took me long enough. I would like to say sorry already, I've just been really busy. The problem that I'm finding with this ...

Hey there, Hmm I have mixed feelings about this first chapter. Let me begin at the beginning though, with the beginning paragraph. I can already tell you have a strong ...