DappledCities

Thank you for that

I still consider it as poetry :)

This is a very strong poem and the tone is very persistent and questioning which really adds a strong emphasis to the message you are trying to convey. I really ...

This is a great poem in the works! I feel like the loss of punctuation and grammar actually add to the poem and its tone of longing, but then again, ...

This is an awesome idea! Yeah, it can be fixed up a bit by looking at the flow of the poem, maybe changing some words or adding/taking some out and ...

This is an awesome idea! Yeah, it can be fixed up a bit by looking at the flow of the poem, maybe changing some words or adding/taking some out and ...

This is an awesome idea! Yeah, it can be fixed up a bit by looking at the flow of the poem, maybe changing some words or adding/taking some out and ...

wow. Enough said.

Powerful stuff here. Sorry, can't relate to this but I can say this was really moving. The minimal use of strong words really made this poem work and gave it ...

Too awesome! Everyone can relate to this!

Too awesome! Everyone can relate to this!

Thanks for the critique!

Thank you so much !

Thank you ! You've no idea how happy this makes me!