Danceingtreeelf

Oh this is beautiful I love it I have to reread it to get everything and I love the plot twist. I thought it was going to be a story ...

This is lovely and just made my day, and the entire time I was reading this I had the mental picture of a child sitting in a school desk looking ...

This is beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I did see the paragraph impairment, that has been fixed. As for the describing him it felt unneeded so i didn't and as stated in another comment this was really ...

I see what yo meant about the paragraphs and spacing to make it easier on the eyes, i didn't even want to read it when it was just a mass ...

Oh wow. Well I do hope you post the rest,I really like the story it is very different from others I have read.

Thank you for pointing that out.I never would have noticed that I have changed POV.

Thank you but this was one of my shorter and less explained was written like this for you to use imagination and to feel the words, but thank you for ...

This is beautiful...just beautiful.Very creative and free,you are very talented.

It makes you truly think about life now don't it.I had two good friends who ended that way and it makes you think.The darkness is only one side and you ...

This is an amazing work,you have a great use of "color" or words in it.The first line really pulled me in and held on tight til the very was very ...

I do plan on finishing this work,I had a lot of fun writing it(and its many rough drafts).But yes I do plan to finish this story.

thanks for point those out i was running low on time and energy but i fixed that and i saw where i change person from 1st to 3rd that was ...