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Re: Madness
Hello! Sorry if I'm not that useful, it's been a while since I've been on this website. I quite like this poem, to be honest. It's short and doesn't seem ...
Mar 12, 2019 -
Re: Alone
Hey, DamienCyfer here writing a short review. Personally, I love this poem. It is relatively short and sweet, and is oddly easy to read. The lines and ideas flow into ...
Feb 12, 2018 -
Re: Who am I?
This is DamienCyfer here for a review! Wow... this is actually really good! The poetry flows well, and the slight brakes in structure are hard to notice in the strength ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: The Blub Monster
Wow! DamienCyfer here for a review! So... this short little story does an excellent job of capturing the fear children feel when they hear things not meant to be there, ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Grounded
Wow! Still not experienced in the delicate art of reviewing, but just by reading this lightly I believe you have captured the complex emotions, reasons, and gradualness of a human ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Old
Hey! This is Damien, writing a quick review. Im still new to this so sorry if its not that good. Well... This short story is excellent! You manage to pack ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: perspective
Hey Bridgetavc, this is awesome!!!! I love how you have given such a strong image in my mind, and that you have kept mystery through out the whole piece. People ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: The Deluge
Hey DamienCyfer here for a short-ish review:) One note, sorry if I am a bit of my best, there is just a lightning storm outside my window! Good time to ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: prologue
Hi, DamienCyfer here doing a little review. I love how the story shows the characters emotions really well, and gives a bit of info to the characters, but not to ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: Front Page Material
Just a short review. The dialogue is fluent, and well accented whilst not overdoing it. In fact, I just read a good mystery book, and they solved it just like ...
Nov 3, 2015
