Cynder

You made perfect sense. Thanks for the support:)

Thanks Wolfare! You did help and the stance thing.. Yeah I'll check out that link:)

Can you give me some examples then? I know you think that way, but please support your examples with valid examples. Cynder out.

Haha, you're actually spot on. It's just that halfway through when I regained my composure, I realized exactly what I was typing and it was harder to finish then. I'll ...

For anyone that reads this, know it is personal. It is basically a journal entry because I am going through some tough times right now. So if you have any ...

Glad I could help.

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Ok so, I understand now. Let's see what I can do with this.. In your first paragraph you start three thoughts in a row with "and." I think that is ...

Thanks, Nightshade21 :) Ill explain Titanic later, don't worry.

Cool, and I understand wanting to keep it simple. Good luck in your writing:)

My pleasure:)

In that case, I have a few pointers. I think it would be better to say "washes over me" instead of "washes past me." To say it passed you means ...

Thank you so much, and I definitely will! :)

Hello

Wow! OK, one thing at a time. I'll take some of your advice into account because yeah it is a short poem. It needs an edit, I know that. I ...

Hey, Cynder here. That was an awesome poem man! If you want to improve it, I'd be glad to help. But hey, that was an awesome story. It's so true. ...