CuteJackRussell

Hello there, In theory this kind of writing could work but basically this is just a bunch of questions and not really a poem. Still I did like it but ...

Hello there, In my opinion this is really good mainly because of the creative topic and new way of thinking in this kind of subject matter. It's also good because ...

Hi there, I personally liked this and generally found it really good and nice to read. It's definitely something a lot of people can relate to and I certainly think ...

Hello there, This is an excellent poem about a poet! A very new way of looking at writing and then putting it into words. The stanza's were all very well ...

Hi there, I absolutely loved the amazing description in all of this and I loved the truth in it. Every word was well thought out and the end result was ...

Hello there, I certainly understand what you are getting at here and I reckon a lot of people can definately relate to this. Everyone young and old is very stereotypical ...

Hi there, I personally really liked it but I did think it lacked flow in between each verse. I also wondered why you placed two '--' at the end of ...

Hello there, This is really good and I personally like it! It really captured me and I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end, which is always a good ...

You wrote: Imagine a world where songs are all cherished. Dream of a place where poet's hearts won't perish. In our souls the words will be eternally etched, Like whispers ...

Hi there, I really liked the emotion portrayed in this poem and I found it great from the beginning to the end. I particularly enjoyed reading the third stanza because ...

Hi there, This is a great story. It really caught my attention and once I started reading nothing could distract me. I liked how the first paragraph went straight into ...

Although this was a little short I did indeed like it. Toward the end it would have been nice to see a brighter more happier line to finish this poem, ...

I'd like to begin by saying that I did really like it. It was of course very simple and I'm sure fairly easy to compose but when I had finished ...

I loved the introduction to the poem and I think it was a really powerful way to begin the poem. I agree with every thing you said in your poem ...

There were a few basic mistakes in this chapter that other people pointed out butthose were really basic things that you don't need to worry about to much had great ...