CuriosityCat

Oh%u2026 (*awkwardly checks poem*) line 3. : P Glad I could help!

Fnump!… no, that was NOT me covering up a laugh. This is so funny! And, yeah, I think if you don't try really hard, your writing can very easily turn ...

This is so beautiful and sad! So poetic! How can people bear to see their love in so much anguish? It hurts my brain. (not to mention my heart.) :' ...

Notice how many "loves" are in there. When I can no longer can find good adjectives for things, either the world has ended or I am seriously touched. ; )

Thanks! Yeah, I dunno what possessed me to do that. And the nitpicks are always welcome!! You have great wisdom, master. I'll change these. ; ) Thanks again, Curiosity(killed the)Cat

It did! Thank you so much! I know i've said that to EVERYONE, but you guys are just so awesome and HELPFUL!! I'll edit it accordingly, CuriosityCat : )

Thank you! You guys are the best! I kind of yanked this together, and I'm kind of satisfied that it worked at all. : ) You're awesome! X ) Curiosity(kiled ...

Thanks for the feedback! Like I said, it's a super rough draft that was mostly slapped on a sheet of notebook paper at 3:00 am, so i'm flattered you think ...

Thank you! And yeah, I had my doubts about the whole "It/Them" thing. I'll try to come up with a new name for them. : )

This…. (sniffles) beautiful! it's so crammed with emotion and so honest! I love it!! I love poems like this. They make me want to cry. Love, CuriosityCat

The whole government IS the Z.A.C., as of the Undead Apocalypse. Everything crumbled, and that's all that's left. It is NOT just for fighting them, it is also the entire ...

Oh my gosh! I swear, I just felt like crying when I read this the first time. It captures the feeling of a funeral perfectly. Everything, the tone, the phrasing…. ...

Wow! This is amazing! It's beautiful, in a sad way. I love it! (And, honestly, it's so cool I can't bring myself to review.) Also, how you repeat the "dead ...

This is amazing! I love the way you describe the girl, as such a lucky, clueless idiot. And the shadow, always left behind and bitter. Do OUR shadows feel like ...

This is really amazing! I love the descriptive language, and how it feels so real and familiar.