CupcakeQueen123

I absolutely love the theme of this. About a recently deceased family member, right? I'm tearing up. Oh my God. This is really beautiful. Just a few suggestions, but I ...

Hi! This is Cupcake, from earlier. :) First off, thanks so much for reviewing my poem. OKAY. So. You were wrong; you're actually a pretty great writer. I can tell ...

Hi :) Two tiny critiques, and then I'm just gonna gush all about the awesomeness of this piece: I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but there were ...

11/10 :D First of all, your metaphor is on point. You seamlessly compare society's influence on and, really, construction of our lives with a sort of dollmaker's on a glass ...

Beautiful imagery! The words you use are intricate and fascinating, and the rhyming scheme is a really awesome touch. :) However, it may help with the flow of the poem ...

Incredibly deep and heartfelt. Important message, too. However, as this is poetry, I have a few nitpicky comments: - You could be more dramatic and original with it. You state ...

Gorgeous imagery. Love, love, love it. However, I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but there a few errors here and there, punctuation-wise. Just an example: "Her world ...

OOOOOOOH "Hadley" because it sounds like "hat" and she wears a hat and she's the mad hatter, isn't she? :) Ah! I'm dying to know what happens next. Like someone ...

Hi -- first, thanks so much for the review! Overall, the poem has a nice kind of sleepy, dreamy tone to it, which is great, but I feel like there ...