Crysi

Which is why I used silver. *laughs* Thanks guys. I'll try to work on it maybe later this week if I have the time. And Bek, yes I did read ...

Thanks guys! :D I just haven't gotten very good reviews on my most recent poetry from my friends and our poetry club, so I was hesitant to post some of ...

*nods* So runs the life of a band geek... lol. Nice.

Mind if I say this was your best piece? In my opinion, anyway. The imagery was excellent, as was your choice of words. But then, it always seems to be. ...

Hmm... There's something awkward about the flow to me. I'll look at it when I'm not drugged up on cold medicine. I believe I know what the three times are...

*head/desk* How did I know my hopping days would not be forgotten? :lol: Great job Ari. I'll have to sing it when I'm not sick.

*claps* Bravo! Very nice. 8)

Yes, but that's the fun of restrictive poems like this - it forces you to be creative. Work on it. Other than that line, this was good. Thanks for introducing ...

I agree with Muse. I know you don't like people comparing a single piece to others, but this really is your style, I think. You work so well with it, ...

*twitches* Here's a hint - post this into Word and let it check your spelling and your grammar. Your icon confused me - at first I was shocked that Sureal ...

Crysi, for the love of GOD will you stop picking at me!! Yes, I SAW it, i didn't bother to right down every freakin word!! I will say again: LAY ...

Wow. When I clicked on this, Z was the last to post on it and I seriously thought it was another story of his. Anyway. Personally, I liked the colors. ...

Qi, I'd watch it if I were you. We are debating whether or not his piece can be considered poetry. Exactly, you're DEBATING. Debates belong in the debate forum. Why ...

Jack I love you and your poetry. If we weren't both taken I'd ask you to marry me, lol. Seriously though, this is... wow. My God. And the last stanza ...

GUYS. If you want to debate the true definition of art, PLEASE take it to the debate and serious discussion board. Thank you. Now, let's please leave this thread for ...