Crysi

Wow. I get chills everytime I read something like this, because this poem was able to capture what I can never seem to express in my own poetry. I love ...

Wow. This was really good. REALLY good. Very dark, sets you on edge... I like it. Great job. *laughs* Sorry I don't have more of a critique for you. Wow.

LOL!! *claps hands* I love this! Thanks! :lol:

....Wow. This is.. really sad. You can feel the pain combined with the knowledge that it's the only way. I know a similar feeling, lol. Very nicely done.

*nods* Alright. I'll work on it.

Thank you! It really was a freewrite first, but it came out as a poem. I really love this one, although the subject is still a bit tender. Thanks again. ...

*smiles* This is really, really good. I like it. A lot. :D

Yes, I know. I'm not saying he deserves anything else, I'm just saying I have a real problem with WHAT you're grading.

Work satisfactory? You rated it as poor. Once again you grade on simplicity, not content. I think it's an excellent poem, very fun.

*growls* I'm fine with people correcting grammar and inconsistencies and even parts of the plot that may be a little off. But NEVER touch a writer's style. That I can't ...

..Okay then. Awesome poem, TBR! Very creative. PsyLynx, your icon scares me. Looks just like the eye of my our last drum major... *shudders*

This is excellent! I love it. One thing - up at the very top, "anger" shouldn't be capitalized. ;) Very cool idea. I really, really like it. *grins*

*nods* I didn't have the proper inspiration for this one. I might try reworking it later.

*stares* This hits home in so many ways.. If I never look at it again, it's only because it's too easy for me to memorize and I'd rather not hear ...

*chokes* She WHAT?! EW. She's a disgrace.