Crysi

Just a quick point - "saphire" should be "sapphire." It's one of those weird words I can never spell correctly lol.

Not necessarily. An author can spell a name any way he or she wants to. And I've seen the name spelled with just one n before. *shrugs*

You know, it would be really awesome to get a bunch of YWS people together to perform this. But there I go again, with my crazy ideas of meeting up... ...

I really like it. Very nicely done.

*laughs* I really, really like this. So deep.

*points* What he said... Brad, you're absolutely amazing. Mesmerizing is a good word for this poem. I loved every word.

Wow Jack... You're amazing with images! I totally agree with everything 'Reida said. Great job! :D

I really like it. It shows the dilemma and pain in a situation like this.

LOL wow.

*blinks* I so want to do that. All of it.

Wow. Usually I don't like rhyming poems with one- or two-word lines, but I really liked this a lot! Great job!

..yeah. What Hunter said. One of those "I love the poem but hate the reason behind it" things. So, for here and now, good job. :)

*shakes head* I love this. So amazing. You have a natural talent for this. Wow.

LABYRINTH!!! *dies* I need that movie. Grar. David Bowie is indeed the best. Anyway, *laughs* This was really good. I really like this.

...Wow. I love this. So much. If ever you want to see the chaos that constantly goes on in my mind, this definitely shows it. Although my chaos is usually ...