Crimsona

Hey Bobby, I'm going to be your reviewer for today - yay! I really love this chapter, I think that's it's a great introduction to your novel. The first paragraph ...

Powerfully true. My sister's friend had to jump off her balcony window due to someone breaking into her flat. I was there when it happened and you have covered the ...

Very sweet poem. As another reviewer said, the 'make life bloom' was a little repetetive, but apart from that it was a cute and touching poem. I'd split it in ...

I usually review poems, but this looked interesting and I really liked it. The first two paragraphs remiended me of a book by Anne Fine called 'The Tulip Touch' about ...

It's a beautiful poem, it really is. Didn't quite have me in tears but very close to - divine imagery, very nice. 'Cadet Blue Eyes'..... I loved that, I could ...

I do like this poem, but I think you need to give it more structure. The ideas are very beautiful - but the rhyme scheme is mess. Sometimes it's a,b,a,b ...

Wow this poem was very enjoyable to read. Very well written for a person of your age, though I'm not judging on your age because it is a beautiful poem ...

Wow... Just... Wow. I can’t actually think of any other words to be truly honest. And a simple ‘Wow’ doesn’t really do this poem justice I’m afraid. I’m not much ...

Wow and double wow, this poem is incredible! It's not got anything particularly 'clever' or anything, but it just seems to work. For me it flows perfectly and if I ...

Interesting, I like it. It sort of remiends me of a diary in some ways. But maybe that's because it's written in first person. It's the sort of thing that ...

Red = Suggestions Bold = Opinions Green = Really liked this part The woods seemed to embrace Anwyn as she stood in front of the small rock house with her ...

You've got to be joking that this is your first real attempt at poetry, it's unreal! Unreal in an amazingly fantasical way that I can't really put into words! For ...

That first day, glancing across the chairs I looked at you and you looked at me I couldn't help but feel jealous of all the pairs Ignoring the music, looking ...

I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I started to read this poem. I thought 'Oh no, not another poem full of pointless questions' but it wasn't like that ...

Overall an okay poem, however there are many things that I feel could be improved upon. I will colour these in red and put my suggestions beside them in bold. ...