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Crimsona

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Modern Life

    Hey there! Crim here to review your poem. I can relate all too well to this poem - it pretty much sounds like the story of what my summer holidays ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: What Disturbance in Sleep May Lead One To Do

    Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Ah, your poem reminds me of some of my early stuff! (Although it's a lot better than what I used to write) ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Let our Fingers Dance

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! Firstly I just want to say that I adore your imagery here, it's absolutely gorgeous - clouds guarding the horizon... I love ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Science, Humor Re: Coder's Lament

    Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Oh jeez, my father is a software programmer and I have to deal with his lamentations throughout the day and night when ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Mixed Feelings

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! This is a very strong and powerful poem. It speaks to me in particular because I can most definitely relate the the ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: She could almost be beautiful.

    Hello there, Crim to review your poem! I do like this poem, it's very matter of fact and it's not too airy fairy which I do like! However my big ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: What is Love?

    Hello there, Crim here to review your poem. This is a very sweet poem and I have to admit the ending made me laugh a lot! You have got a ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Scars

    ​​Hello, Crim here to review your poem. The topic of this poem is very sensitive so I will try not to critique the content but rather your technique. I apologise ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Martians Killed President Kennedy

    Hello, Crim here, attempting to review your poem, Oh jeez I absolutely adore this poem. You really have a talent; the flow, the rhymes, the topic... *squeals* Sorry, I can't ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Their Light

    Woah. This poem is so powerful! Like the other one I reviewed, it has such raw emotion in it. You seem to have a real knack for rhyming. Sometimes trying ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Not For Me

    Hello there, Crim here! As RoyalHighness also said, I won't properly critique your piece as it is personal - besides, I can't actually see anything to nitpick anyway. I love ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Science, Other Re: Rain

    Awh I do like this poem, rain is so beautiful and such a lovely topic! Don't get too hung up over trying to make your poem rhyme, the rhythm and ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The words on these walls

    I really love this poem, I can really relate to it and I think it's always a good thing if you can get your readers to be able to relate ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The flowing word

    Oh I love this! It definitely has the beauty of the flowing word. I love the flow of your style, it's so easy to read and this poem really put ...

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: You'll never read this.

    I really liked this poem actually. I'm not usually a fan of simplistic poetry but I think it really worked. The only stanza I didn't think really worked was this ...

    Sep 6, 2012


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