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Re: Modern Life
Hey there! Crim here to review your poem. I can relate all too well to this poem - it pretty much sounds like the story of what my summer holidays ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: What Disturbance in Sleep May Lead One To Do
Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Ah, your poem reminds me of some of my early stuff! (Although it's a lot better than what I used to write) ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Let our Fingers Dance
Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! Firstly I just want to say that I adore your imagery here, it's absolutely gorgeous - clouds guarding the horizon... I love ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Coder's Lament
Hello there! Crim here to review your poem. Oh jeez, my father is a software programmer and I have to deal with his lamentations throughout the day and night when ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Mixed Feelings
Hello there, Crim here to review your poem! This is a very strong and powerful poem. It speaks to me in particular because I can most definitely relate the the ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: She could almost be beautiful.
Hello there, Crim to review your poem! I do like this poem, it's very matter of fact and it's not too airy fairy which I do like! However my big ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: What is Love?
Hello there, Crim here to review your poem. This is a very sweet poem and I have to admit the ending made me laugh a lot! You have got a ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Scars
Hello, Crim here to review your poem. The topic of this poem is very sensitive so I will try not to critique the content but rather your technique. I apologise ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: The Martians Killed President Kennedy
Hello, Crim here, attempting to review your poem, Oh jeez I absolutely adore this poem. You really have a talent; the flow, the rhymes, the topic... *squeals* Sorry, I can't ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Their Light
Woah. This poem is so powerful! Like the other one I reviewed, it has such raw emotion in it. You seem to have a real knack for rhyming. Sometimes trying ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Not For Me
Hello there, Crim here! As RoyalHighness also said, I won't properly critique your piece as it is personal - besides, I can't actually see anything to nitpick anyway. I love ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Rain
Awh I do like this poem, rain is so beautiful and such a lovely topic! Don't get too hung up over trying to make your poem rhyme, the rhythm and ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: The words on these walls
I really love this poem, I can really relate to it and I think it's always a good thing if you can get your readers to be able to relate ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: The flowing word
Oh I love this! It definitely has the beauty of the flowing word. I love the flow of your style, it's so easy to read and this poem really put ...
Apr 8, 2014 -
Re: You'll never read this.
I really liked this poem actually. I'm not usually a fan of simplistic poetry but I think it really worked. The only stanza I didn't think really worked was this ...
Sep 6, 2012
