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  • Poetry » General, General Re: staring/reaching/finding

    Hi there, Button! Crimson here for a review! Upon a quick read through, my first impression is that it seems very serene, but almost flat. Very little dynamic, the style ...

    Mar 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: It Began In the Market (Poem One)

    Heya, niteowl! Crimson here for a review! Brief disclaimer: I can be picky and occasionally annoying about certain things. Try to ignore that; I'm here to help, first and foremost. ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Watch the Red River Flow

    Hi there, ghost223! Crimson here, for a review! This is a really interesting piece, so I hope you don't mind if I get a little nitpicky and poke at it ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bright Stands, Iron Chance

    Hi there, Chaser! Crimson here for a review. Two things before I begin. One, I am not at all familiar with sestina. I did look it up first, and it ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 3

    Hi there, regismare! Crimson here for a review! You've seen me before, you know I'm picky and a stickler for grammar, so let's dive on in with the detailed work ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: Faerie hollow

    Hi there, Mockingjay! Crimson here for a review. I'll preface this with a disclaimer of sorts - I can be very detailed, and that may sometimes come off as being ...

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Alsari 4 (The Myriad book 1)

    Hi there, Feltrix! Crimson here with a review! I should start by saying that I haven't yet read the prior chapters, so I will deliberately overlook a few things that ...

    Feb 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Play Dead, Longing

    Hey sabyemerald, Crimson here with a review! I really like the imagery in this poem. You do a fantastic job of capturing the struggle, the longing, and the way that ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 2

    Hi, regismare! It's Crimson here, for a review. Initial disclaimer: I can come off a little harsh sometimes, but I promise I don't mean anything by it. I'm merely trying ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Perspectives

    Hey there, Empires. Crimson here with a review! I'd like to first say that as someone who has been in a LDR for several years, this is intensely interesting to ...

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Other » Fantasy, General Re: Widow

    Hey there, DarkPandemonium! Crimson here, for a review! I'd like to start by saying that this is the first time in a long time that I've seen such an interesting ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 78

    This is a really neat little poem! I like the imagery a lot . Normally I'm a stickler for correct grammar, but in this case... what matters most is consistency ...

    Feb 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Hell has no Sympathy/Star Child

    Hey there, Sillia! Crimson here for a review. I'll evaluate your poems separately, so for now I'll start at the top, with Hell has no sympathy . As I'm reading ...

    Feb 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 1; Shujaa (Edited)

    Hey, Jimss. Mind if I poke a few additional holes here for you to patch up? :mrgreen: Kidding, I'll try to be helpful! Let's see what we've got! (In case ...

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Art » Other, Theatre Re: Nature's beauty

    Hey there, MagicAce! Crimson here with a review. First thing that jumps out to me here as I read through is this part: With a stroke of your left hand, ...

    Feb 21, 2017


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