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Re: staring/reaching/finding
Hi there, Button! Crimson here for a review! Upon a quick read through, my first impression is that it seems very serene, but almost flat. Very little dynamic, the style ...
Mar 21, 2017 -
Re: It Began In the Market (Poem One)
Heya, niteowl! Crimson here for a review! Brief disclaimer: I can be picky and occasionally annoying about certain things. Try to ignore that; I'm here to help, first and foremost. ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: I Watch the Red River Flow
Hi there, ghost223! Crimson here, for a review! This is a really interesting piece, so I hope you don't mind if I get a little nitpicky and poke at it ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: Bright Stands, Iron Chance
Hi there, Chaser! Crimson here for a review. Two things before I begin. One, I am not at all familiar with sestina. I did look it up first, and it ...
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 3
Hi there, regismare! Crimson here for a review! You've seen me before, you know I'm picky and a stickler for grammar, so let's dive on in with the detailed work ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Faerie hollow
Hi there, Mockingjay! Crimson here for a review. I'll preface this with a disclaimer of sorts - I can be very detailed, and that may sometimes come off as being ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: Ascension: Alsari 4 (The Myriad book 1)
Hi there, Feltrix! Crimson here with a review! I should start by saying that I haven't yet read the prior chapters, so I will deliberately overlook a few things that ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: Play Dead, Longing
Hey sabyemerald, Crimson here with a review! I really like the imagery in this poem. You do a fantastic job of capturing the struggle, the longing, and the way that ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 2
Hi, regismare! It's Crimson here, for a review. Initial disclaimer: I can come off a little harsh sometimes, but I promise I don't mean anything by it. I'm merely trying ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Perspectives
Hey there, Empires. Crimson here with a review! I'd like to first say that as someone who has been in a LDR for several years, this is intensely interesting to ...
Feb 24, 2017 -
Re: Widow
Hey there, DarkPandemonium! Crimson here, for a review! I'd like to start by saying that this is the first time in a long time that I've seen such an interesting ...
Feb 23, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 78
This is a really neat little poem! I like the imagery a lot . Normally I'm a stickler for correct grammar, but in this case... what matters most is consistency ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: Hell has no Sympathy/Star Child
Hey there, Sillia! Crimson here for a review. I'll evaluate your poems separately, so for now I'll start at the top, with Hell has no sympathy . As I'm reading ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 1; Shujaa (Edited)
Hey, Jimss. Mind if I poke a few additional holes here for you to patch up? :mrgreen: Kidding, I'll try to be helpful! Let's see what we've got! (In case ...
Feb 21, 2017 -
Re: Nature's beauty
Hey there, MagicAce! Crimson here with a review. First thing that jumps out to me here as I read through is this part: With a stroke of your left hand, ...
Feb 21, 2017
