Hello, Chaser. Steam1244 here to give you a review! This poem is really neat, unfortunately I didn't understand part of it. The second stanza confused me a lot, sorry. I loved the 6th stanza though! I loved it because you question everything, and I don't see that a lot (unless I'm reading the wrong poems, I don't see it a lot). There was a few grammar mistakes that I have noticed throughout your poem. Yes, I know, everything can't be perfect, nor will it ever be! I loved your choice of words, although, that was partially what confused me. I also feel as if somethings were unclear to me. I feel as if that needs to be fixed, emphasize the need. I'm sorry for being a bit harsh,but trying to be very honest.Oops, but I still loved it! Your poem was very interesting to me and magnificent. I thank you for your time and I hope you have a great day!
Keep Writing,
Steam1244
Points: 4
Reviews: 80
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