CreativelyWritten

Oh, I really liked this! I have to say if written well I love these types of stories. I was actually getting lost in the few paragraphs you have here. ...

At first, I wasn't sure what I was reading. Except as I went on I could tell. But that wasn't your fault, I'm just not very good at reading poetry ...

I thought this poem was really cute! It also helps that I love rhyming poetry. I feel that in some lines the rhythm isn't matching. Particularly in the first stanza. ...

I love it. I think the message comes through loud and clear. And rhyming never heart anyone. It isn't easy for a message to come across with simple poetry such ...

Alright. Congrats on the story. It's very bittersweet. Now I promise I'm not asking this next question to be rude but, are you a native English speaker? A few things ...

I cannot even begin to tell you how much I loved this. First, historical fiction is always a cool subject for me. I enjoy history and I think it's cool ...

Alright this poem is pretty cool and helps the reader feel what you're going through. But from description and the rest of the poem it makes it seem like you ...

A good poem that tells the story in just a few lines. Maybe for a better flow think of switching up the length of the lines. Some only have a ...

I think it's super cool that each stanza has the same repeated beginning for each line. And even more than that, I love the second to last stanza because you ...

This is sad. I do like how the sentence, "Everything happens for a reason," is repeated between each paragraph. The repetition is lovely. I did get confused between whether you ...

I really liked the end bit. From "And the notion...." to the end. I didn't quite understand the middle part from the third line. I get the falling in love ...

Okay I like this poem because it seems to show growth of the author. They used to only see the fantastical parts of history but now seem to realize that ...

The story wasn't bad although I am confused why the girl went home with a drunk guy. I mean, she was said to be beautiful and he wasn't exactly sweet ...

I first read the poem for content because not everyone is good with poetry or spelling or grammar. So I like the poem for it's content although I will agree ...

I love the way this started off. It was so children storybook that it was charming. The big words did kind of seem out of place but you said this ...