CreativeFreak

Hi, there. This is really good. I liked it. What kind of took me by surprise though was: that's a fucking mystery The curse word. Yeah, I'm not saying I'm ...

Hullo, there! :) I like this piece a considerable amount: great begining, people can relate. Good job. Nitpicks: Immediately Anna let out a scream and jumped. The boy retreated, his ...

Hi, there. :) I actually really liked these! The first one was very good and probably the one I enjoy the most. It hap depth and its chosen words really ...

Hi, Forest. I like this poem. It was very deep, but the only thing I felt wrong with it was that it was a little too repetitive. Besides the, "I ...

Hehe, the beginning is funny! :) Hey there. I liked this piece a lot because even though it is really long, once you start reading you can't really stop, and ...

Hi. :) Um, yeah. Like Elinor already said, the very beginning of this poem is confusing. It's like you're trying to hard to be poetic or deep? The key to ...

Hi, you can call me Freak if you please.. Nice piece here! Nitpicks: a world of trials and vicory *Victory Only problem. Good job. Really good and deep poem. It ...

Hi, NikkiLow. This is a very good piece and it kept me intrigued for the whole time I was reading, it made me want to read more. Great job. Sometimes ...

Hello, nice to meet you and read some of your work. It's very good actually I have no idea why no one commented yet. Maybe the length, but either way ...

Hello again. :thud: Nitpicks and comments: The beginning line is very sweet and really cute, I like it. Mind if I use it sometime? :lol: When the waves of hate ...

Aw you're new!! Well then, welcome to YWS! I shall be your friend now x) Call me CF/Freak :D and now that an actor we know nothing about has died ...

Hey Conrad. :) CF here. This is very good and intricate. I didn't find any problems with it grammar wise, but the whole some of the names: Perhaps Hades and ...

Hello! CF/Freak here :D Well, personally I kind of hate the rhythm. It is too fast and seems obnoxious (I don't know how to explain it, but it simply annoys ...

Hello, CF/Freak here :D Nitpicks: This beginning starts out kind of boring, you need to catch the readers attention; just a note. Punctuation- The whiteness at the centre of the ...

Hello, CF/Freak here :D Nitpicks: Don’t believe me, then why do you ask. This is supposed to end in a question mark, since of course it is a question. I ...