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Re: Apples and Poetry
Hello, hello! The title is something rather simple but it's why I decided to review! Most of issues I saw seem to of been covered by those that review before ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: late-night love
Alright, this poem is from 2019 but to hell with it, I need something to review that won't kill my lacking attention span at 2:46 am hoping my dad doesn’t ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: Sleep Soldier
I've written stories about world war two. It's my personal most favorite subject to learn about beside dinosaurs. I really like this! I do think having a rhyming scheme would ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: Gone Away - Chapter Two - 2085 Words
Hello, hello. I'm here for part two! First things first, grammar. Capitalize things like Mom. Names are always capitalized! Put a space after you end dialogue to the start a ...
Jun 20, 2020 -
Re: Gone Away - Chapter One - 797 Words
Ok, so. There's a lot that I notice that needs fixing, but that's ok! Improvement is always good! I'll start with the bad first, get that out of the way. ...
Jun 18, 2020 -
Re: The Cold
In the simplest of forms, this is a sweet poem that many people should read. It conveys a sense of wonder, I guess. it reaffirms that things will be ok, ...
Jun 17, 2020 -
Re: Roll in the Grass and Stare at the Sky
I am currently sixteen, soon to be seventeen. I'd feel strange picking this apart little by little, I must be honest with you on that. I relate to much of ...
Jun 17, 2020 -
Re: Glory of the Night
Alrighty Lee, let us see if I still have my reviewing mojo! First off, a short poem! Always a bit easier and quicker to get through, considering my attention span ...
Jun 17, 2020 -
Re: ghost of me
The six feet deep, always a classic line, Yellow! (I like the username, by the way. Reminds me of the Beatles song, Yellow Submarine!) I would presume that this poem ...
Jun 16, 2020 -
Re: Aspirations and Realities
Ok, I haven't even read the rest of the poem but WOW. World of Warcraft wow, holy... Something about those first lines. It felt like reading a book, a book ...
Jun 16, 2020 -
Re: Pain as an Afterthought 2.0
Huh. That's my first thought. Huh. It's wonderful, really. It doesn't make you think too hard but really lets you know what happening, I suppose. I presume it's about, whoever ...
Jun 16, 2020 -
Re: ingrained in my rainbow blood
The title... MMM, that's some good stuff. It definitely got me intrigued! The moment I heard about that... I wanted to throw my phone. God, it pisses me off still ...
Jun 16, 2020 -
Re: When Somebody Dies
God, bees are wonderful. Sorry, I read that and I just had to put down the thought right away! The first line is entrapping, catches the readers' attention for sure. ...
Jun 16, 2020
