Hello, hello! The title is something rather simple but it's why I decided to review!
Most of issues I saw seem to of been covered by those that review before me, so I shall just cover what I liked about the poem!
The second and third lines are very nice to read, I like the words you used. It just seems intricate, in a way and that's nice! I really like the third line, varnished in a glossy glaze. It's just really nice to read.
I find the comparison, I suppose, intriguing. Apples and poems. Why apples? Such an interesting choice!
Otherwise, not bad!
- Cow
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