Corncob

Nice review--I agree with everything you said.

*Objection Punctuation isn't always needed in poetry, and here especially I think it works fine as it is :)

Second feature

Awesome--a happy medium between those two extremes would be great (easier said than done xD). You're welcome, and thanks for responding to my review! :)

Sure!

Happy to help ^_^ and thank you

Sure-anytime!

You don't need a slash in the first quote ^^

I know, I was just referring to it as part of my constructive criticism ^^. Nice poem!

Ok, cool, yeah it's your writing and that was just my interpretation ^^. Thanks for writing this awesome picece!

Sure-glad I could help! And if you want to put in stanzas (I've tried and I feel your pain--YWS formatting is icky) you could try putting in periods or * ...

I'm sure you will ^^ xP

Sure, glad to help :)

How predicatable xD That response was predictable wasn't it

This seems like a line of your thoughts, ending with a predictable unpredictable "microwave." I really want to review this, but there isn't much I have to say. You bring ...