ConverseFireGirl

This is a really good poem that I can relate to and I'm sure a lot of other people can too. I think that the sticks and stones may break ...

This actually made me feel happy and it is so well written! :D I especially like the line about digging and that the answer is there somewhere and EVERYTHING. Great ...

Hey there! I LOVE THIS POEM! :D It is so true and I can almost see the process you so nicely describe. I also like how you make this poem ...

This is a really good piece of writing. Your plot and story line is most intriguing and I actually can't wait to read more of this. I've noticed that your ...

Hey there, I really like this piece of work, it comes from the heart and I can imagine it is easy to relate to if one suffers from anxiety. I ...

This is AMAZING! :D :D This is amazing for the following reasons (a) the reader can relate (b) it is good advice, (c)no errors or mistakes and therefore (d) easy, ...

Hey there! Converse is here for a review for you! :P Right, so I love the idea behind this, I was thinking of writing something just like it recently but ...

This is a really good poem, it is great in both rhyming and rhythm. Great job. Your description is also impressive, in just a few words you really capture details ...

This poem is really good, but there are some improvements that I think could be made :) First of all, I like the idea behind this it is a good ...

Hey there, tonytwo! I am here to give you a review :D Right, so like the writer below me said, I like the innocence and simplicity of this poem. You're ...

Hey there, I'm here to give you a review! First of all, I'd like to point out that I have not read your first chapter, which already gave me a ...

Hey there! For your first poem this is VERY nice indeed. I personally like the way this poem flows and I also like the way you make it short and ...

Hey there! Right, I like the idea behind this short story, it is a good idea and you have good potential! :) Now, a couple o' mistakes in it: "atractive" ...

Hey there! :D First of all, I quite like your lack of capitol letters, I think it adds more to them poem somehow! The first sentence was seriously beautiful, I ...

Hey there, I really liked this poem, I found that it had a beautiful rhythm to it when being read. My favourite lines for sure are probably the last two ...