ConfusedGlasses

Ah so that's who Peter is! I see. Am I being a tubelight? Did everyone else already figure this? Dang, I'm so stupid sometimes... Never mind that... This was another ...

Whoa... That is so... What the... I guess she deserved it... This is such a short chapter, and so well written, considering the circumstances, that I don't know what to ...

Hey! Another chapter well done. I like how you keep shifting POVs between. It gives the feel of... I don't know... it just gives a feel okay? A good feel. ...

Another magnificent chapter. I must say the more I read your work the more i feel like you're a published author or something. But never mind that. Back to the ...

This is very... emotional. I can feel it vibrating through me, honestly. "..."Hello, boy," she said. "Why are you crying?"..." It's kind of confusing. Who says this? But it is ...

Wow. You are good! Here for a quick review! Skye... Hmm, nice name. Actually I like all the names. And I think I'm going to give the entire story a ...

Hey! I'm here for quick review! Alrighty! So, your story is pretty good so far, at least from what I see in this chapter. I haven't read the ones before. ...

Heyya! Here for a review! This is the longest poem I've read, not that I've read many around here. It really caught me. At first I was confused. What is ...

Hey! I'm here for a review! I haven't read Shiver, the novel I mean. But I kind of get an idea of what it's about. That's nice. You were able ...

Oh My God What The Hell... Who did it? I'm gonna kill 'em! No. Wait. I think it's better if Ben kills them (or him, whichever it is). Yup. Honey, ...

Alrighht-y!!!! I'm here to drop some comments hon!!! The previous chapter had me all lost as to what would happen next. And I must say that it was nice to ...

Whoa... That is just... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay you know that one paragraph that @IamTraunt was complaining about? I love it!! And finally we get to see how things came to be ...

Hey! I'm back for a review! So this chapter sort of seems like a completely different story from chapter 8. I like it. This gives us more insight to the ...

Hey there! Here for a review! So the first thing I noticed was that you keep switching between tenses and it doesn't make sense overall. But I understood what you ...

This is amazing!!! I haven't read the previous chapter but I can promise you I will (partly because of the name, osorezu and hana, I love Japanese names). Okay, back ...