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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Pain Of Words

    Hey there, Cyvain87, itś your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming at you with a review. First off, your poem is short but powerful; I really delight in these kinds of ...

    Dec 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: my life.

    Hey there, LuckHamilton, it's your favorite Thunderclan medicine cat dropping in with a prophecy (Oops, we're all out of those, so I guess I'll give you a review XP) Alright, ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: writers' block

    Hey, Saruka, it's your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming with a prophecy from Starclan (jk). I really enjoyed your poem; it spoke to me. Very much. I'm gonna start off ...

    Oct 24, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, Fanfiction Re: "Let it Load"

    Hey, Alliyah, it's your favorite Thunderclan medicine cat dropping in with a message from Starclan (jk :)) First we're going to tackle any grammar or punctuation mistakes I happen to ...

    Oct 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hater

    Hey, irsyad23, it's your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming at you with a prophecy from Starclan (just kidding, I've got a review). Last year, I hated my body so much ...

    Oct 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Free

    Hey there, ElykAris (cool name), it's Leafpool coming at you with a review. I'm gonna tackle some grammar and punctuation first. "Everything happens for a reason let them be" There ...

    Oct 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Because Because Because

    Hey, DarkPandemonium, it's your girl, Leafpool, coming in with a review! Oh, yes, push somebody off a pier; it'll solve ALL your problems. "She hit my face once, when she ...

    Aug 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 6

    Hey, it's your girl Leafpool here (trying to catch up on your novel; I've been incredibly lazy) with a review. A pretty short chapter, but still pretty good. Yuni really ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 5

    Hey Stormcloud, it's your girl Leafpool (I got my name changed!) coming at you with a review. YES, I LOVE shopping! In the first chapter it seemed like Yuni was ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 4

    Hello again Stormcloud, here again for another review! "The moon shone cooly upon her face," well that's ironic, wasn't it just earlier in the day when you called her moonface? ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 3

    Hey Stormcloud, it's your girl Caitlin; coming at you with a review. Again, just going to write comments as I read. Let's do this! “We’ve never welcomed them here before? ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 2

    Hey, Stormcloud. It's your girl Caitlin, coming in with a review. I can't wait to read your story, SO EXCITED!!! Anyway, I'm just going to write comments on it as ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 1

    Sup, Stormcloud. It's your girl, Caitlin, coming in with a review. First off, I love the name Asha from the minute I read it. It's a beautiful name. I'm not ...

    May 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Blue Memories

    Sup, RubyRed. It's your girl Caitlin; coming at you with a review. I really liked your poem and the rhyming. It flowed really nice and didn't feel forced. I don't ...

    May 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Letter to my Cousin

    Sup, Morrigan! It's your girl Caitlin; coming at you! And I am here (obviously) to review your poem so let's dive into that. The first stanza honestly confused me, but ...

    Apr 5, 2017


You are beautiful because you let yourself feel, and that is a brave thing indeed.
— Shinji Moon