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Re: The Pain Of Words
Hey there, Cyvain87, itś your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming at you with a review. First off, your poem is short but powerful; I really delight in these kinds of ...
Dec 14, 2017 -
Re: my life.
Hey there, LuckHamilton, it's your favorite Thunderclan medicine cat dropping in with a prophecy (Oops, we're all out of those, so I guess I'll give you a review XP) Alright, ...
Nov 2, 2017 -
Re: writers' block
Hey, Saruka, it's your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming with a prophecy from Starclan (jk). I really enjoyed your poem; it spoke to me. Very much. I'm gonna start off ...
Oct 24, 2017 -
Re: "Let it Load"
Hey, Alliyah, it's your favorite Thunderclan medicine cat dropping in with a message from Starclan (jk :)) First we're going to tackle any grammar or punctuation mistakes I happen to ...
Oct 19, 2017 -
Re: Hater
Hey, irsyad23, it's your favourite Thunderclan medicine cat coming at you with a prophecy from Starclan (just kidding, I've got a review). Last year, I hated my body so much ...
Oct 12, 2017 -
Re: Free
Hey there, ElykAris (cool name), it's Leafpool coming at you with a review. I'm gonna tackle some grammar and punctuation first. "Everything happens for a reason let them be" There ...
Oct 11, 2017 -
Re: Because Because Because
Hey, DarkPandemonium, it's your girl, Leafpool, coming in with a review! Oh, yes, push somebody off a pier; it'll solve ALL your problems. "She hit my face once, when she ...
Aug 20, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 6
Hey, it's your girl Leafpool here (trying to catch up on your novel; I've been incredibly lazy) with a review. A pretty short chapter, but still pretty good. Yuni really ...
Aug 18, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 5
Hey Stormcloud, it's your girl Leafpool (I got my name changed!) coming at you with a review. YES, I LOVE shopping! In the first chapter it seemed like Yuni was ...
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 4
Hello again Stormcloud, here again for another review! "The moon shone cooly upon her face," well that's ironic, wasn't it just earlier in the day when you called her moonface? ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 3
Hey Stormcloud, it's your girl Caitlin; coming at you with a review. Again, just going to write comments as I read. Let's do this! “We’ve never welcomed them here before? ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 2
Hey, Stormcloud. It's your girl Caitlin, coming in with a review. I can't wait to read your story, SO EXCITED!!! Anyway, I'm just going to write comments on it as ...
Jun 29, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 1
Sup, Stormcloud. It's your girl, Caitlin, coming in with a review. First off, I love the name Asha from the minute I read it. It's a beautiful name. I'm not ...
May 30, 2017 -
Re: Blue Memories
Sup, RubyRed. It's your girl Caitlin; coming at you with a review. I really liked your poem and the rhyming. It flowed really nice and didn't feel forced. I don't ...
May 30, 2017 -
Re: Letter to my Cousin
Sup, Morrigan! It's your girl Caitlin; coming at you! And I am here (obviously) to review your poem so let's dive into that. The first stanza honestly confused me, but ...
Apr 5, 2017
