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Re: The Undead, Golden, Angry Birds [Part 1] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Clarice Arrais with a review here! Your piece of work is nicely done and engaging. I am satisfied with it. I loved: [Ben’s leg was pelted with soggy egg yolk.] ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Pendulum Of Fate 1.2
Okay, that was kind agonizing and good! I could feel second by second the tension and despair of William. I could have a notion of the scene by the sound ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Depressing Happiness
I have to say you have a neck for it. The presentation, organization and content is highly displaced in here. It brought me back some years ago when I was ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Ansiprus
Hello! I loved this piece of writing so much. It is defferent, it has a different setting and configuration. It let me curious about the future following part (please tell ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Labels
Hey you. You moved me with what you wrote in here. I cannot imagine how hard it is. I've never been there, but I know a little of abusive people ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: This is my life. This is my lie. This is me.
Clarice Arrais with a review here! Your writing is nice and I liked it very much. The way you disposed the two styles caused quite an impact on me. I ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Do you look so bad?
I appreciate your work! It is highly elaborated and made me experience lots of different things at the same time. The rhyming is excellent, the timing too, I could almost ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: My One True Love
Where did you take the idea of praising our Greatest reason to live in here? ^^ I loved it. Really liked and I am imagining the pitch and rythm right ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Équilibre
Clarice Arrais with a review here! Jeez... It reminds me so much about my lil sister and I. Siblings have this thing: the older try to look after the younger, ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Great Journey
Clarice Arrais with a review here! Your writing is nice and I liked it very much. The way you present us the crew talk. Short and straight to the point. ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Thirteen Again
Hello! Clarice Arrais here. OMG, I liked it so much! It was like a breeze to my brain (after so much reading and writing in here). You skillfully did it. ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Cry For Help
Psycological Texts are intense, deep, and you did it. You made me think about it over, and over... Why do we write? What are doing with our pens and typings? ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Razorblades
Hi. Here goes a review. I have to say I enjoyed very much reading your short story. I could feel the wind messing with my own hair. ^^ This feeling ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Ink Black
I really loved Rita. The fact she is not nice is what gives her "humanity". I loved the tension created by the motherly pression, the feeling of superiority over the ...
Feb 17, 2014
