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Re: Every Hero
Hi there, imyourdensity! Londone here for a review. This poem actually has a rhyme scheme that stays in tune throughout the whole thing, and I don't see much of those ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: gone
Hey there, Eternity! Londone here for a review. This was a very haunting thriller. I got some chills throughout reading, and I think you did an incredible job. The flow ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Trust Me
Hi, Flumadiddle! Londone here with a review. I really enjoyed this. It was a great poem, simple and mindful, and I really understood how the person telling the poem, wether ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Notes From the Night
Hi, fortis! Londone here for a review. I enjoyed this, quite honestly, and it made me feel like I was having my eyes opened to the realization that I haven't ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Pulling At Me
Hi, Junel! Ghost here with a review. I felt a little on edge about this poem. I was pulling a little this way, a little that way. I never really ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Free
Hello there, Dalisay! I'm totally not stalking you Ghostie here for a review. I loved this, quite honestly, and it spoke to me. I just thought the title was a ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: 32 days a life
Hi, story4life! Ghost here for a review. This was an interesting piece, but I had a few minor issues with it. There were grammar & punctuation slip-ups that occurred over ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: Not Yet....
Hello, WhosabellCanWrite! Ghost here for a review. Please don't hate me, I mean no harm, even though Carine wants to murder all of humankind--I mean what At first glance, I ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: ~Suckers~
Hi, WhosabellCanWrite! Ghost here for a review. (I know I'm a year late.) This is a somewhat thrilling piece, taking a classic idea (using vampires, somewhat like Twilight) and turning ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: 'est
Hello there, Ghost here for a review. Ghostie's very unreliable and terrifying, so don't take her seriously unless you want to. So let's begin, shall we? First things first: I ...
Nov 6, 2017 -
Re: two of you
Ghost has arrived. Hello. How do you do? Ghost here with some probably useless information and constructive criticism. I enjoyed this very much. I think there were a lot of ...
Oct 30, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 89
Ghost has arrived. Ghost perceived a good writer, so she slithered in like the shadow that she is and decided to write a review where she isn't lazy. First things ...
Oct 30, 2017 -
Re: Wonderland
Ghost here with some constructive criticism. Take it lightly, because literally my entire being is a big joke and I don't really take myself seriously. Ahem. First of all, pat ...
Oct 30, 2017
