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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Every Hero

    Hi there, imyourdensity! Londone here for a review. This poem actually has a rhyme scheme that stays in tune throughout the whole thing, and I don't see much of those ...

    Nov 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gone

    Hey there, Eternity! Londone here for a review. This was a very haunting thriller. I got some chills throughout reading, and I think you did an incredible job. The flow ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Trust Me

    Hi, Flumadiddle! Londone here with a review. I really enjoyed this. It was a great poem, simple and mindful, and I really understood how the person telling the poem, wether ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Notes From the Night

    Hi, fortis! Londone here for a review. I enjoyed this, quite honestly, and it made me feel like I was having my eyes opened to the realization that I haven't ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Pulling At Me

    Hi, Junel! Ghost here with a review. I felt a little on edge about this poem. I was pulling a little this way, a little that way. I never really ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Free

    Hello there, Dalisay! I'm totally not stalking you Ghostie here for a review. I loved this, quite honestly, and it spoke to me. I just thought the title was a ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: 32 days a life

    Hi, story4life! Ghost here for a review. This was an interesting piece, but I had a few minor issues with it. There were grammar & punctuation slip-ups that occurred over ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Not Yet....

    Hello, WhosabellCanWrite! Ghost here for a review. Please don't hate me, I mean no harm, even though Carine wants to murder all of humankind--I mean what At first glance, I ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: ~Suckers~

    Hi, WhosabellCanWrite! Ghost here for a review. (I know I'm a year late.) This is a somewhat thrilling piece, taking a classic idea (using vampires, somewhat like Twilight) and turning ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: 'est

    Hello there, Ghost here for a review. Ghostie's very unreliable and terrifying, so don't take her seriously unless you want to. So let's begin, shall we? First things first: I ...

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: two of you

    Ghost has arrived. Hello. How do you do? Ghost here with some probably useless information and constructive criticism. I enjoyed this very much. I think there were a lot of ...

    Oct 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Deleted 89

    Ghost has arrived. Ghost perceived a good writer, so she slithered in like the shadow that she is and decided to write a review where she isn't lazy. First things ...

    Oct 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wonderland

    Ghost here with some constructive criticism. Take it lightly, because literally my entire being is a big joke and I don't really take myself seriously. Ahem. First of all, pat ...

    Oct 30, 2017


As ideas are always better than their execution, so too must dough taste better than cookies.
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