Cirute

Wow. This poem is awesomely epic! The whole story it tells is something to marvel at. The language you used is quite impressive as well. "But that it was the ...

Ha! This is an awesome poem. I really got a good chuckle out of it. There's really nothing I could add to something like this-- it's pretty perfect! There's also ...

I kinda liked this. I especially liked the aspects of guilt, sorrow, and sadness. It's really interesting to think about, how something that, in retrospect, is not that big of ...

Hello Lucrezia, since you have been so fond of my work, I thought I ought to review some of yours! ;) I'll start by saying that, in all honesty, I ...

Hi, SJ, Cirute here to review! I'm going to look at this from a technical standpoint before diving into the meat of the poem. From what I can tell, the ...

Hi, Rhiasofia. I've always really liked your poems, and this one's no exception. The rhyming was flawless, as was the flow. You really got everything to come together quite perfectly, ...

Hello! Cirute here to review your poem. I'll start by saying that I really, really liked this. The analogy you used here was awesome! The fact that you used elements ...

Hello, Findingmyway, Cirute here to review your poem. I'll start by saying that, though the whole depressed-teen thing is waaayy overused here, I still liked your poem. It was different ...

Hi Lucrezia, Yeah, I can never say anything negative about your work. The story is perfect, the writing is perfect, everything about it is perfect. I especially love the fact ...

Hi, this is going to be part review, part message to the author. Let me start by saying that there is really nothing to be said about this that has ...

Woah. This was powerful. I absolutely loved the message behind it. I kinda share the same mindset as the poem. Yes, why must people use religion as a means to ...

Hello there! Cirute here to review your poem. Let me start by saying that, even though, personally, I don't believe in god, I still found this poem quite nice. Your ...

Hello and happy review day to you! Cirute here to review your poem! Let me start by saying that the length of this is quite impressive. The fact that you ...

This is quite impressive! I really love the "left, right, left, right," repetition it has. It makes the poem a great read. For some reason I can imagine this being ...

Like everything you write, this is an amazing, super creative, thought provoking, and splendid read. The language you use is superb, as well as giving the piece good flow. As ...