ChurlishLassy

I hadn't intended to read the entire thing but somehow I did. I would either make the voice clearly crazy or the jackels clearly a metaphor, but this may be ...

Ooo I chose a good person to stalk, I am relieved. "Skin of sky" I really like that, makes me think of the sky as milk skin, only blue. And ...

Bright Eyes, ah the inspiration that can come from a depressed vegetarian! I wrote a story inspired by one of his song's too. Props. I really liked your writing style. ...

To the reader (me) you don't really seem to know what you are talking about, artificial intelligence in atleast the type of freindship you are trying to express, as if ...

Aside from "aw, shutup" (I don't think a kid would bother to say "aw" before shutup) nice language for the first graders.The situation is of course too short though; they ...

I don't think the characters make sense unless you are going for unimaginative and cliche. Apparently, they are all pretty stupid, except Roger, a nerd with glasses, so why would ...

I'm impressed, at first I thought might be pinata, but then I disregarded it as some lame maybe scifi-y thing, yet it turned out to be pinata after all! I'm ...

Well in the first place the plot is cliche, I have seen about five diffrent storys in diffrent mediums, movie, scripts, storys blah, about two suicidal people talking, and blah. ...

Very colorful great discription, but unless you add more it doesn't make much sense, you wrote: "What am I? I am that unforgettable, unforgivable time in the hole between space ...

I like it but maybe for the wrong reasons (actually definatly), I like it because it seems to be perverse, like a little girl and her teacher, and he does ...

I was surprisingly great considering you are 13. I think it would be great for any age, I loved that the rhymes didn't seem forced at all. I also like ...

I liked it more than the title suggested I would. It reminds me of those documentaries talking about the killer prehistoric 8 foot tall birds, am I close? Some of ...

Great book. Probably my favorite. By John Kennedy O'Toole. One of the few books my brilliant father has ever recommended to me. Very real. It is the absolute tragic comedy. ...

Wow, I am getting my vampire meets girl novels mixed up apparently. I know there was a vampire named Edward who drove a car, I think a Volvo, in the ...

I couldn't find anything wrong with it... That sounds slightly cynical. Very fascinating part of history. You might enjoy a book by George Orwell, I might have got his name ...