ChristianAlexander

I disagree with Winie but agree with Perdido. It's a good story and an interesting topic but there is a lack of specific detail that would draw the reader in. ...

Hey, man! I read your poem three times and I really liked it for the most part. The concept is interesting. I like that it stays consistent and follows the ...

The poem is awfully repetitive. I have an idea maybe you would like. My brother is, who is 21, is writing his first novel. In one of the scenes in ...

Hello xxKittyKatxx! I will be your reviewer today. Even though other people might not like the color change, I like the pink font. haha. Your poem is pretty good in ...

Hey! My name is Chris...umm...or..Christian if you would like. I will be your reviewer for today! :smt003 Ok, buddy: I would like to tell you that I like your metaphors. ...

Silken birds in crystal trees sway back and forth in waxen breeze preserved with trace of antique rain. Excellent imagery! I love the adjectives you use here. Pale blue curtains ...

Hey! :smt003 I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought it was really well written and it definitely stood out from the other poems I have been reading. The style that ...

Hey! I'm Chris. I really like this poem. I read it about five times and each time I liked it more. You stay on topic and I like the rhymthm. ...

Hey, man! :smt003 I am your reviewer for today! 1. You should pay attention to punctuation. Even the simple stuff like, capitalizing, apostrophes, and periods/commas. Even if you use them ...

Hey Sura! :smt003 First off, I think this poem is beautifully constructed in terms of prose and structure. You use phrases like, "tundra's kiss," "...cascades abound," and "blood and hound," ...

Hey! I really enjoyed the poem. It had a reserved and eerie feeling to it. I like the way you use one word sentences. It gives an emphasis and strength ...

Hey :D The topic of the poem is a good topic. I think the poem itself is a little awkward to read. I read it four times to make sure ...

Heyyy! This style of writing is very interesting. Watch the tenses in your story. Keep it consistent. Other than that I like your writing. It's clear and understandable. The style ...

Hey! :smt003 First off, I would like to say I do not correct grammar. I am awful at it. haha Secondly, I enjoyed reading the story. You have an excellent ...

Hello! I would like to let you know that I am not a specialist in grammar so none of my reply messages will contain it, unless the matter is trivial. ...