User avatar

ChocolateCello

How nice to have a guest. Please, take a seat.

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: You Lied To Me

    'Ello! It's Cello! I'm not the best at introductions so I'm going to dive right in. I agree with lightsong very much on the fact that punctuation plays a big ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words Matter!

    'Ello, it's cello! This poem had a nice message but I do not think this was the right way to share the message. Feel free to call me a couch ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: a glimpse that took my heart away...... <3 <3

    Hello! It's Cello here to review! Let's get to it- (I'm probably going to be focusing on little mistakes for the majority of this review) my life was dark without ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Review Re: the Words

    'Ello, it's Cello here to review! I really liked this work and I think all readers and writers can easily relate. I'm not good with complimenting so I'll move on ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ......

    'Ello, it's Cello! Time for a review! I saw you response to an earlier review and I understand that you're not trying to pleas everyone but I'd like to put ...

    Apr 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: The Most Random 3-Word Each Story To Be Written (Includes gays, exploding dicks, and pinatas!)

    Wow! This was sure something. Not an enjoyable something Okay so I saw you're message. "This is just a joke" I'm sorry but jokes are supposed to be funny. This ...

    Apr 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Micayla

    Hey! It's Cello! I get that this isn't your poem and you can't change thing but I hope you can pass this on to the author. I enjoyed this poem ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why the Sun Shines

    'Ello, it's Cello! I'm here for a quick review! I really liked the 'spread the joy' vibe that this poem gave but I feel like it still has room for ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: To Write a Poem

    'Ello, it's Cello! Here for a review. I'd like to start to say I appreciate satire poems. If you check my portfolio, my earlier works were nothing but satire. I ...

    Mar 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: A World Without Suffrage

    Hello, it's Cello here! I'd like to leave you with a quick review so here I go... I'd like to start with your title. Suffrage is a term that simply ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Poetry is dead

    'Ello, it's Cello! I'd love to review but first I want to get my opinion out of the way so I can continue this critique in a formal manner. If ...

    Mar 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Hesitation

    'Ello, it's cello! Here for a quick review. When it comes to meaningful poems/poems that tell a meaningful story I always avoid rhyming. A lot of times it takes away ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: The Giant

    'Ello, it's Cello! I'm going to say it now. This review is going to be terribly short. After all, this work is only thirty-six words long. This was a very ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: Scars

    'Ello, it's Cello! I'm not sure if there's any truth behind this but this story was very interesting. It's a great plot for a short story but the writing could ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: She Loved Him, And He Loved Her, But It Wasn't That Simple

    Hey! Cello here! I really liked this poem. It had a beautiful story and the rhymes worked very nicely. Still, there's room for improvement. He said that he loved her, ...

    Feb 6, 2016


Do the right thing. It will gratify some people and astonish the rest.
— Mark Twain