-
Re: You Lied To Me
'Ello! It's Cello! I'm not the best at introductions so I'm going to dive right in. I agree with lightsong very much on the fact that punctuation plays a big ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Words Matter!
'Ello, it's cello! This poem had a nice message but I do not think this was the right way to share the message. Feel free to call me a couch ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: a glimpse that took my heart away...... <3 <3
Hello! It's Cello here to review! Let's get to it- (I'm probably going to be focusing on little mistakes for the majority of this review) my life was dark without ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: the Words
'Ello, it's Cello here to review! I really liked this work and I think all readers and writers can easily relate. I'm not good with complimenting so I'll move on ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: ......
'Ello, it's Cello! Time for a review! I saw you response to an earlier review and I understand that you're not trying to pleas everyone but I'd like to put ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: The Most Random 3-Word Each Story To Be Written (Includes gays, exploding dicks, and pinatas!)
Wow! This was sure something. Not an enjoyable something Okay so I saw you're message. "This is just a joke" I'm sorry but jokes are supposed to be funny. This ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: Micayla
Hey! It's Cello! I get that this isn't your poem and you can't change thing but I hope you can pass this on to the author. I enjoyed this poem ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Why the Sun Shines
'Ello, it's Cello! I'm here for a quick review! I really liked the 'spread the joy' vibe that this poem gave but I feel like it still has room for ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: To Write a Poem
'Ello, it's Cello! Here for a review. I'd like to start to say I appreciate satire poems. If you check my portfolio, my earlier works were nothing but satire. I ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: A World Without Suffrage
Hello, it's Cello here! I'd like to leave you with a quick review so here I go... I'd like to start with your title. Suffrage is a term that simply ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Poetry is dead
'Ello, it's Cello! I'd love to review but first I want to get my opinion out of the way so I can continue this critique in a formal manner. If ...
Mar 22, 2016 -
Re: Hesitation
'Ello, it's cello! Here for a quick review. When it comes to meaningful poems/poems that tell a meaningful story I always avoid rhyming. A lot of times it takes away ...
Feb 24, 2016 -
Re: The Giant
'Ello, it's Cello! I'm going to say it now. This review is going to be terribly short. After all, this work is only thirty-six words long. This was a very ...
Feb 12, 2016 -
Re: Scars
'Ello, it's Cello! I'm not sure if there's any truth behind this but this story was very interesting. It's a great plot for a short story but the writing could ...
Feb 12, 2016 -
Re: She Loved Him, And He Loved Her, But It Wasn't That Simple
Hey! Cello here! I really liked this poem. It had a beautiful story and the rhymes worked very nicely. Still, there's room for improvement. He said that he loved her, ...
Feb 6, 2016
