ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here for a review! Okay- Punctuation! There are so many places where a nice little comma, a simple period, would make the story ever so nice. Martin watches ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! Happy review day! Okay, let's talk about punctation. You tend to be using commas for slight pauses at the end of line while you ...

Hey! Cello here! I'm begging you- Please add commas! Sure, you have a few here and there but you need to be consistent. When reading this After all there is ...

Hey, Cello here! Not quite sure what to say about this one. I agree with the last review quite a bit. "connive", "Freudian", and "lucid" feel out of place and ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a review! Happy review day! This was beautifully written. All the words flowed perfectly and the meaning in it was so precious. A few suggestions though- ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! I really like the creativity in this. You quickly switched from 'poetic' to 'casual' multiple times and made it all work. I likes ...

ChocolateCello here! Happy review day! This review will be quick, for there are few mistakes to be corrected. No I will not think for myself! Not a fan of the ...

Hey! Cello here! Woah, okay, wow. This was amazing. The speaker, this character, has obviously been through a lot, and even in this little piece of writing, it was easy ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! I don’t write love poems. I don’t build boys flimsy flower gardens, When using repetition like this my personal rule is always repeat three ...

Hey! Cello here! This review is going to be rather short. This was a very interesting poem but I'm not sure how I feel about it. It was good, yes, ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! Happy review day! Okay, I'm going to be focusing on content here. Honestly, this isn't my strong suit, but I'll try. Her cheeks, pink ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Happy review day! (This is my first review and I don't do a lot or reviewing on a normal day so sorry if it's a bit choppy) ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, this review is going to be short and quick- Okay, so I'm not the most religious person, I do go to church occasionally, though it's pretty ...

Hey! Cello here! Okay, making this quick and simple. That memory is fresh on my brain, when you swore to never talk to me again. Okay, so it all depends ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a quick review! Okay, first thing, watch your tenses. I’ve liked you for months 'I've' is present. I was in denial 'Was' is past tense. Throughout ...