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Re: Without Me
Hey Angus! :D Yes, I'm the first ever-so-reviewer! YAY! ^.^ This was a sad poem and I guess you've written it very nicely. :) Now there are just nitpicks to ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Endless Fields and Emerald Leaves
HPR! :D Yay! Yay! Yay! ^.^ Finally a poem on which I can help you on! XD I loved this poem so much. You've written it so beautifully and it ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: In This Hell Of Mine
Hi Lorna xx ! Its Cookie again to review, Review! ;) Your poem is very In.Ter.Rest.Ing :D To tell the truth, it becomes better and better day by day, man! ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Happy Brithday YWS!
Hey! :D I found your poem very In.Ter.Rest.Ing xD And fun to read. It was like I was singing a song. :P La La La La La La La, La ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Who am I Meant to Be
Hello Maria! :D First, Welcome to YWS! =D I hope you are enjoying the website. :) As a beginner, and me as a reviewer, I must correct the mistakes so ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: The sky - blue sky
Sindhu! :D Man, I told you in class about the "I's" remember? :O And I also re-wrote it for you. :P Anyway, good try. :D Keep Writing. xD -- Lakshmi.
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Eternal Night
LORNA!
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Call Of The Wind
Hey Lorna! :D Cookie's here to interview! :O I see you've observed really well. :) This is a really good poem for beginners but I have to also say that ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: To fly away.
Hey Atticus. :) Good poem you got there but I guess the title isn't much related to poem, though. :S Sorry to say that. >.< Just tiny mistakes which you ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Friends
Hi beautyOFwriting. :) Nice poem but I guess they are lot of mistakes to be corrected. The blue markings will be your mistakes and the red markings are the corrections. ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
Hi GeeLyria! :) First of all, VERY CUTE AVVIE!
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Blessing
Hi Maki-Chan! :) This poem is the most wonderful and touching I've read. :') No mistakes, no punctuation corrections, no rhythms off... It's just perfect! :D Must publish! :O Cheers, ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: The Golden Gate
Hi Shiney! :) I'm here to review you for today! ^.^ I want to say that this poem is really interesting and a good topic :) Makes us know how ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Sea and me
Aku! Okay. So, the poem was good but to admit, it was a little confusing. But the good thing is that it was different! :D something I've never read & ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Missing You
Hey Jolene! ^^ Your poem was good but you missed out some things that has to be corrected. :) Your poem: You're in my heart so strong and steady, like ...
Sep 8, 2011